Waiting

Marble Pie has been waiting to hear three words for a long time. But today is the day she will hear them from the one dragon she cares about the most in the world.

Normally don’t do this but; featured 9/8/2023 — 10/8/2023

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8888Godzilla8888

8888Godzilla8888 #1 · Aug 8th, 2023 · 1 · ·

A cute little story,
I am very pleased with how you presented Marble here. She's in love with Spike but she's not over possessive of him. When she found out he was in love with somepony else, it hurt her but she accepted it, which is very mature of her. Marble really cares about Spike's well being and if that means letting him go she will do that.
This act of maturity proves she deserved the happy ending.

A little nitpick:

Marble was the youngest of the Pie sisters and lived on the rock farm together with her sister Maud and Marble Pie

I think you mean 'her sisters Maud and Limestone Pie'.

MLPFan98

MLPFan98 #2 · Aug 8th, 2023 · 1 · ·

This was a cute story. Not that many fics that show Marble being paired with Spike.

Come to think of it I wish there was an episode where the Mane Six and Spike visited the rock farm (and I mean the other girls and Spike, we know Applejack visted.)

Dragon-In-Black

Dragon-In-Black #3 · Aug 8th, 2023 · 1 · ·

11661814
I am pleased that my writing satisfied! Also thank you for pointing out that error!

Dragon-In-Black

Dragon-In-Black #4 · Aug 8th, 2023 · · ·

11661829
I know right? There aren’t many stories with Marble x Spike and since I was in the mood for some romance, I decided; why not? Yeah, I would have loved to see an episode like that.

PuzzleMaster98

PuzzleMaster98 #5 · Aug 9th, 2023 · 1 · ·

There need to be more of this ship!!

Axolotl222

Axolotl222 #6 · Aug 9th, 2023 · 1 · ·

“Oh, that?” Spike said smiling sheepishly once again. “That was just a little crush from when I was a kid and teenager, nothing more nothing less. It wasn’t genuine love, not the same as I feel for you,”

Welp, Faust said this is cannon now, so...

Dragon-In-Black