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Spike, the assistant of Twilight Sparkle, savior of the Crystal Empire, friend of the element bearers. You would think that there is nothing strange about him. How wrong you are. You will learn a disturbing truth, one that will change your beliefs completely.

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Wow, is the angel with wings an angel? Does the angel with wings have angelic wings. Is the angel with wings that are angelic wings an angelic person? Is the angel that is angelic with wings that are angelic wings understand the meaning of the word redundant.

Wonder what else we will see of Spike and Luna's interactions together?
Certainly loving that big time.

Spike had also had visions about her return and was not frightened the slightest when she returned. Not because of the visions, but because she was way weaker than him in comparison.

Does Luna/Nightmare Moon end up growing stronger or happen to have potential untapped yet that has her not look way weaker in comparison?


Anyway, really do love the interaction in the chapter.
So this looks like this is becoming Spiluna there? :0 Lovely!

Wonder what Spike thinks about what led Luna to fall into NMM there? Such as how its due to Celestia wasn't there for her while the ponies kept overpraising Celestia over Luna(while they took Luna's work for granted pretty much) there?

“Well don’t stop your kiss because i am here, do continue!” Princess Cadance said, as she looked at the two, waiting for the scene to unfold in from of her eyes but that did not happen as the Princess of the moon and night started whistling innocently and the fallen angel looked at his imaginative watch that was not there and walked out of the room and headed for whervere he was going. “I messed up didn’t I?”

Eeyup:eeyup: you done goofted, Cadance

A really nice chapter read there of those two \ovo/.

I can't tell if these are YOUR views on incest or if it's just for the book😬
I really hope it's for the book...

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Both yes and no, but I will remain neutral on the matter.

Ah shit this will be fun:scootangel:

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I do believe that it is just that He is that strong not that they are weak per say. Because the author says that he wishes to kill princes Celestia like it is nothing that makes it seem like he could kill anytime he wishes but he doesn't because that's just resentment for who she seems like but isn't actually said person

Certainly loving this chapter too.

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I said "look weak in comparison" there though.
Like him being so strong the others(such as Luna) look way weak in comparison due to they can easily being killed by him if he wanted to.
Do wonder if Luna/NMM had some potential that lets her match up to an angel's there or something. That I was wondering there.

I will say I like your reference to Jesus Crist.

Honestly incest in all things is one of the best worsts, well assuming that it is love and not ra**

Well you a nice romance break right here, good job on the world building.

Oooh, someone in trouble!~

Hey just now got here and I'm already loving this story keep up the great work can't wait for the next chapter

Wonder how Luna is going to react to t hat and such?

Will there be a sequel!?!?!? I MUST KNOW!!!!!!

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Maybe, I have not decided yet.

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THERE BETTER BE! IT CAN'T END HERE! PLEASE DON'T END IT HERE!

Great story, hope to see if there will be a sequel.

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