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Sunset Shimmer once had a friend that she did everything with even when she was the pupil of Princess Celestia. However, when she ran away, she said hurtful things to her which Sunset regretted ever since. Maybe the human counterpart can help?
There’ll be a sequel in the future.
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This is pretty neat, good sir, and it's cool seeing a favourite character of mine, Vinyl, receiving another story of her Equestria Girls counterpart. Easily one of the best designs for the human versions of the ponies in my opinion.
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Thank you! Thanks for reading!
This was a cute short story. I'll be honest, I'm not sure if a direct follow up really counts as a different story, but we'll see what happens.
The fight was... well Sunset being 'mean' doesn't really do it justice. I'm interested to see how that confrontation gets addressed next time they meet because, oh boy.
Personally I don't subscribe to the "Sunburst/Sunset" family idea some of the fandom pushes, but there's nothing really wrong with that, just personal preference, as I said. I was almost going to say that Sunset would know from Twilight about Starlight, but you are correct, that doesn't get solved until after the Friendship Games, so I am also curious if your follow up story will have them meet before that happens.
Improvement wise, other than a few typos here and there, you rely a lot on the purple-unicorn syndrome, so I'd take a look at that for future projects.
Anyway, good luck!
nice work
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Wow, thank you for the pointers and thanks for reading!
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Thanks!
lays
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Starlight Glimmer.
Oh ha ha. You don't want to know.