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Infatuation


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decent so far... however, I won't know until the end.

The answer to the question; depends on the story.

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Thank you. If you didn't, then I messed up somewhere. And in either case, always open to criticism if you have any thoughts.

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Well, it is incomplete so I think it might be too early to judge on it In my opinion.

idk why the early downvote storm but you've got a good track record so far, so I'm looking forward to seeing how this goes!

It's good! I hope this has a long burn, and isn't over too quickly.

nice work

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No idea why those happen, honestly! I sometimes wonder if it's just a few people who look at a lot of newly published stories and downvote a lot of them, but I really have no idea.

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Thank you! It's a few chapters, and there might be sequel planned at some point to continue the story. I could see this story going places eventually, maybe with the princesses getting involved, and all that. :twilightsmile:

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Thank you!

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Pretty sure someone set up a botnet to downvote stories that include certain keywords in the description.

I like! You nailed Gilda like she nailed Scoots. I wish there was a little more about how they're in public (are they in public? Does Gilda just get away with it?) but the bullying is great, as is how Gilda is just using her for a good fuck.

Damn I like dom anthro futa.

This is very good.

very very good.

Honestly, I’m loving it. And I’m seriously praying for it to turn out that she’s super EXTRA fertile for mares and fillies… I imagine Dashie is already with multiple foals <.< >.> <3

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Thank you! It can be difficult to strike the right balance when it comes to bullying. By my standards this here is pretty tame, but there's always people who prefer their scenes wholesome.

As for the public part, well, something is going to happen tomorrow. You'll see. :twilightsmile:

Very fun ending!

The gryphon rolled her eyes. “You’re not pregnant. I’m a gryphon. You’re a fucking pony. How the fuck would that even work?” She stared at them, and then followed up with “And don’t try to convince me that it might. I don’t wanna hear it.” as Scootaloo was about to raise her voice.

*cough*Hippogriff*cough*

Ooh, very lovely work. I wouldn't mind reading a sequel to this. Maybe Gilda and AJ sharing someone, I imagine she'd be the only Pony who could match Gilda's musculature.

I think you did a good job. I liked it from beginning to end. Scoots are kind of my favorite character in this story. :scootangel:

The ending is pretty funny. I think you left the ending very good indeed.

Well that's a pretty cool story~
No wait, I would probably call it a chill story…because Gilda is a very chill girl~
I like how strong she is!

Interesting so far can't wait to see where this goes

nice work on story

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