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Juicy stuff!
Where do you get that picture of that Super Hot, and HUGE Tits Cow Mare.
That description
This was a wild and interesting beginning I can't wait to see more.
This is really good shameless oversexualized degradation, very impressive for a first story! I thought for sure you would have a whole library of practice on hyper furries or something elsewhere. I love how relentlessly dominant Celestia is, you do a fun job of giving Ama no chance to resist at all, and having the narration justify everything even while flirting the edge of intense and taboo. I'm a little divided on the start - it's so strong to have her already bound and helpless and overwhelmed, and I like cutting to the chase, but I also lament never getting a chance to see her be overconfident and sharp to make her being brought so low have more of a fun impact and contrast, y'know?
Very hopeful for chapter two, esp. if there's transformation shenanigans involved. Keep writing, please~
Can someone tell me where to get that picture
i.ibb.co/Rc624XF/Img-1597715927576.jpg
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You can find it by searching for "oc:Amaranthine" on Derpibooru, or just going directly to image 2366036. Enjoy!
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Thank you very much! As new as I am to writing 'actual stories', I've got typefucking experience and rumor has it that I'm damn good at it, so that certainly helped. The second chapter is going to have (by my estimate) vastly improved pacing, so you can look forward to that.
A few paragraphs of Amaranthine trying to assert her dominance only to get utterly steamrolled by her solar goddess would've been wonderful, I agree, but I was already getting too verbose. At some point it's better to cut your losses and move on to the next story, rather than polishing a single story over and over until it is 'perfect'. That applies doubly so if it's the first story you've ever written.
As for the delayed response, I may have been on vacation. I'm back now, so... Send me
nudesPMs if you have questions or are interested in proofreading the second chapter.10425440
Thanks. And since she is a Cow Mare, with her lactation boobs. Can I seen some Boobjobs please!
While I enjoyed the sexy dominating Celestia, her language really took me out of the story many times, was very OOC and comically to here Celestia say "bitch", "mooslut", and the like, also I felt like the dialogue was repetitious despite it's hot content, I feel like you could cut out half of it and still have the same chapter.
But back to the earlier point, the language and attitude by Celestia didn't feel like Celestia but some OC who just looks like her.
This was awesome.
I feel like she should get impregnated by the end of this.
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The artists name is on the tag on the ear. Its for a paetron
When is chapter three.
Can’t wait for chapter three
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I know this is off topic. But how is your own stories? I really like to see them get continued.
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Slow. Vrey slow. Working mostly on fanficiton and wattpad right now
It had been a year, does the commissioner plan on continuing this?
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We've had ideas, but there's no concrete plans right now. At the time I mostly wanted to focus on writing some other stuff.
BOY !!! That was SSSOOOO GRAPHIC !!!!!!!
Hope you come back to this eventually, some of the best erotic writing I've seen here!
fuckign hawt