decent so far... however, I won't know until the end.

The answer to the question; depends on the story.

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Thank you. If you didn't, then I messed up somewhere. And in either case, always open to criticism if you have any thoughts.

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Well, it is incomplete so I think it might be too early to judge on it In my opinion.

idk why the early downvote storm but you've got a good track record so far, so I'm looking forward to seeing how this goes!

It's good! I hope this has a long burn, and isn't over too quickly.

nice work

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No idea why those happen, honestly! I sometimes wonder if it's just a few people who look at a lot of newly published stories and downvote a lot of them, but I really have no idea.

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Thank you! It's a few chapters, and there might be sequel planned at some point to continue the story. I could see this story going places eventually, maybe with the princesses getting involved, and all that.

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Thank you!

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Pretty sure someone set up a botnet to downvote stories that include certain keywords in the description.

Interesting so far can't wait to see where this goes