Very fun ending!

The gryphon rolled her eyes. “You’re not pregnant. I’m a gryphon. You’re a fucking pony. How the fuck would that even work?” She stared at them, and then followed up with “And don’t try to convince me that it might. I don’t wanna hear it.” as Scootaloo was about to raise her voice.

*cough*Hippogriff*cough*

Ooh, very lovely work. I wouldn't mind reading a sequel to this. Maybe Gilda and AJ sharing someone, I imagine she'd be the only Pony who could match Gilda's musculature.

I think you did a good job. I liked it from beginning to end. Scoots are kind of my favorite character in this story.

The ending is pretty funny. I think you left the ending very good indeed.

Well that's a pretty cool story~
No wait, I would probably call it a chill story…because Gilda is a very chill girl~
I like how strong she is!

nice work on story