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I absolutely loved that in the middle of corrupting Vera, she was already setting up her next hunt.
Nice
Wtf this made me Christian now!
Damn that was boldly depraved, once again.
Two small things i noticed : who is laurel, and why are celestia's eyes blue at the end?
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Laurel is the woman's daughter; she was named Sophie at first, but it looks like I missed changing a couple of those names. Thanks for catching that.
As for Celestia' eyes, some depictions of her have had a more bluish tint to them, and that has always sounded nice, so that's what I went with.
FUCK
stream of conscious commentary, because that's the only way you'll get even a fraction of the appreciation you deserve:
I appreciate your disclipline. So much. There's such raw, pornographic sexuality in your work, but you hold up the pretense — and even that's a demeaning way to put it — that there's serious work. With just the smallest other decisions... Maybe the way to put it is that Vera does genuinely feel like a character, living in a world that is a different genre of writing. And Celestia is so strong she can transcend that.
This character doesn't actually feel like Celestia anymore. Which is fine. Things develop, and I love where we are, but it's interesting to note. Celestia's body is still a great ideal of perfection, and strongly supports the themes.
Like, there's a level of speed that this comes in that it almost feels like a shitpost, and it fucking works. You write utterly unique conversations, and they're fucking sex to me.
This is the most sincere, satisfied laugh that I've had during a specific moment in a long time. I'm sure I've jumped over commenting on a lot of things that deserved it, but. Damn. Celestia exists and I love her. She actually enjoys being horny like I do, where the amazement and astonishment at how far things can go, and the earnest, heart-pounding high of appreciating that is just as important.
I have an odd, niche kink for twisting my beliefs, and the cognitive dissonance of trying to hold outright untrue thoughts. Maybe it's just 'gaslighting', but almost to a level above it. I was not expecting it to happen so literally and tangentially right in the middle of this story, but having Celestia and Vera both react to the simultaneous bullshit turbo-truth on the nature of Big Cock and the way — did she even get named? Laurel's mom, the loose slut, just submits to her base urges and doesn't ever try to question the targetted encouragement... that's Heaven, screw all that doctrine noise.
The ending was very solid too, even if, uh, I wasn't quite in a state to fully enjoy it. I think that's alright! It definitely seems like this Celestia isn't even close to satisfied yet, and I'm curious what her next whim will be.
All in all — thank you. I think you took your theme and ran it way past expectations, fully gripping into meat of what was useable and shoving further than most authors dare to even try. :3 I enjoy your writing so much, and I hope you get even a fraction of the fulfillment for all the effort you clearly put in.
Nay I Say
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Thanks for the comments. I always look forward to your posts.
You're not the first person to say something like my work feels like a different genre, or not even like fan-fiction at all. I did come to this as a bit of an outsider, I guess. I'd never written any kind of fan-fiction before my first story here, and my knowledge of MLP could be generously described as surface-level. I think I gravitated to Celestia because her basic personality seems more "realistic" than other characters, if that makes sense. Using that as a framework and twisting until it was all but unrecognizable just turned into a natural process.
Pretty much all I want to do is develop a distinctive voice in my writing, one that my audience can look forward to and that I enjoy cultivating. That's all an author can ask for, I think.
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Oops! Did I juxtapose two different thoughts? I don't think that's what I meant by 'genre' — my idea was more like, say, if you were watching Die Hard for 50 minutes but then as John McClane was crawling around vents, suddenly Goku bursts through a wall and hurls Hans Gruber at the moon. That's what you're capable of achieving. But, like, in a good way.
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Ah, I get you. Well, that’s a good thing too!
What is going on around here? People out there wildling or ponies or whatever these horny creatures are, they definitely do. Need the Lord
We don't allow NSFW art in the "source" thing for cover art. The best practice for directing people to your cover source is to simply state the derpi ID number somewhere in the description.
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Thanks. I’ll keep that in mind.
Horse come I think you ment cum
*Holy fuck*
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That was really hot. People who prefer to be dominant can self-insert as Celestia, a powerful asshole who can rape without any consequences. More submissive types imagine themselves as the woman. Everyone is happy.
Also congrats on almost monopolizing futa pony on woman niche.
l'm noticing another certain theme in your stories; were you raised in a religious household, by chance?
My only real pet peeve with this story (and others you wrote) is that ponies are treated as invincible gods who have humanity at their mercy. This line especially made me roll my eyes:
Said a prey animal who had her ass handed to her by someone throwing a rock at her. Honestly, there are so many ways to completely block magic in the show (horn rings, the ooze, changeling goo etc.) that I doubt humans didn't develop ten different plans to take her out. Hmmm, that could be a sequel: Celestia acts like an arrogant bitch as usual, only for a human to beat her and show her where she belongs: beneath her human superior.
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I was raised Catholic. However could you guess?
I've certainly taken some liberties with the power levels; you're not wrong about that. I consider my takes on these characters basically idealized, no-holds-barred versions of the ponies we're used to. For me, it's just more fun to write about how to mindfuck a goddess.
But one thing to consider is that there is no magic on Earth, aside from what the ponies bring over (or at least, there isn't supposed to be...). Being an alicorn in our world is bringing a rocket launcher to a fistfight.
That said, there absolutely will be consequences for Celestia's flagrancy. And my next Mary and Celestia story will introduce a human character who could be a match for the Sun Princess, at least mentally.
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Lucky guess lol. I take it they did a poor job of instilling their worldview into you, huh?
Fair. We all have our kinks.
Ironic, considering humans invented rocket launchers. Plus I don't think it's so uneven. When Twi used magic of all alicorns to clash with Tirek (who had the magic of all normal ponies plus Discord) they produced blasts that are tiny by nuke standards. But hey, you are the author and can make them as OP as you want.
Nice!
Can't wait! Do you have the approximate release date already or is it too early to say?
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It's a little too early to say when the next story will drop. I try to do one every couple months or so, but I've also got a few other irons in the fire.
I'm glad you're looking forward to the next one!
I hope everypony had a happy Easter! Since I'm still Christian after reading this fanfic made me one. Maybe for life! Who knows?
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The new Catholic outreach initiative is going surprisingly smoothly…
... Bit of unresolved history with Sister Clarence then?
Really, you have your imaginary god, But she is the literal horse sun goddess. No one here can match her power.
Nice story, Was hoping for an aftercare of sorts, just to show her motherly nature just like a god should be, eh? and I hope that Celestia doesn't abandon her. I'm sure she could use a woman herem around here~
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Aftercare is a foreign concept to this version of Celestia.
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that's……interesting at best, disturbing at worst.
because that meant her personality is not like that princess we knew with some love.
good to know that no vicious humans will be able to take advantage of her, though.
the women here does these because they're afraid, but celestia can take what she wanted, yet goes through all that because she have the power.
just saying that it really takes some true will to be able to release and hold back unlike some random beast, and showing her care would make stuff a lot more interesting. being good is complex and beautiful after all.
keep up the good work!
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Yes, but they do hold power over her, and I think thats what she fears. That for all her power, for all her talk... that there are those out there amongst those she ravages who see her for what she is. Nothing. That no matter how much she ruins them, tears apart their flesh, theres something more then her. In the end, she only has as much true power over them as they allow.
That iron can only rule man so far
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I'm afraid I don't understand?
Why?
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Eh, rapists like her are all ultimately cut from the same cloth and are at the end of the day the same thing: cowards and bullies. Deny their ego once and watch them descend into a frothing rage and utter bafflement
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Well that's true. Like I quoted before, being good is beautiful and complex.
The fact that rapists, bullies are like that is an unspoken fact. Giving in to those wild desires is easy, restraining one's powers is harder.
While these things are true, it's worth mentioning that it's very likely that no one in these tales will be able to defeat her by force. In other words, she's already holding herself back and under the current circumstances she does so to taste this young lady's fear, because it's fun. Why do I think so? Aside from the world building of Earth and Equestria, it's likely not the direction the story is going. She could do this for fear but that's unlikely. I see no reason for her to fear humans in a physical way, anyway.
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Everyone always jumps to the nuke comparison straight away, as though humans had ever used more than two of the very earliest and most primitive prototypes in anger (everything else, including the stuff that gave us our impressive stock movie snippets, was just tests).
The more interesting comparison of the Twilight vs. Tirek clash might actually be one with conventional explosive ordnance, and I’m already not so sure it looks particularly impressive next to some of the stuff put into action in both World Wars. If perhaps more colorful.