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Told you: Mary is perhaps the worst thing that could have ever happened to Celestia. Ah well. Give it time. Today, tommorow. A week or till the last star fades... sooner, or later, death will come for Celestia and existence will be quit of her.
And whatever comes next will be just.
Also first
Ohoho a new Postmodern Fic! Tonight is a good night!
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By this point, she's probably no different than her "dark counterpart"; Daybreaker.
Or somehow be even worse than her!!??
Is that ever possible?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shepard_tone
Aww, even the way Twilight is broken is adorkable!
This one got kinda epsteiny, ngl - people might not like it that dark, but it's sorta accurate to how that all went down, based on what I've heard.
There's a fascinating nature of — your writing captures the disjointed essence of being horny in a ludonarrative way? The raging contradiction of asserting control while having none of it.
The writing and pacing and style is far too elegant and constructed for that to be sincere. I read
and writeenough collapsed goony fantasies borne of a brain collapsing in lust to know that Mary and Celestia's are a simulation, but good job and thank you.Mary has a surprising amount of faith in "couples". She doubts and writes off and confuses herself with Celestia's alien and immortal and powerful nature — but (from a metafictional perspective, Tia's still being written by a human, so she's not that strange / ) normal human couples of decades abruptly stop being able to communicate and align their goals, too.
I don't know if there are any satisfying continuations to this... plot arc, and world — and I mean that as a more of a compliment than not. It takes a wonderful amount of craft to work this many vectors against each other with such complexity, that it remains engaging (even as just raw smut!), while still feelings like things are going to keep getting worse.
Glad you've been sticking at it, thank you for writing.
Fun fact: the dream at the beginning was based on a similar one I had myself, in real life. No idea what that says about me...
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I don't even like porn Post has me not only reading it but musing on the psychology of its characters.
Oh, speaking of which, most of Celestia's issues stem from the fact there's really been no consequence for her actions. She's never had to control her impulses and thus has an ego of glass.
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You dreamt of horse dick. Not going to have to delve far into the realms of Jungian thought for this one mate
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All good things, I think ;)