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Tell me I'm wrong, baby.

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Bravo, Celestia, bravo! Justify yourself while (seemingly) admitting your own mistakes... well, you have to be able to do that.
Frankly, whatever horse Celestia was, she needed to think with her head, not with a log between her legs. If you position yourself as a reasonable being, then be kind to match. Rape is one of the most terrible crimes, and the fact that Twilight did not incite the persecutors of the law against her loving mentor is a terrible mistake.
As for me, Twilight could generally spit on everything and live happily ever after somewhere in the wilds. Why did she come out into the light again? To get Celestia into trouble? Hardly, because, as it was said, this is not her style. Become another hole for pleasure for a horse fucked on the head? Then what was the point of running away? She would have given herself there and, perhaps, would now be warming the bed not only to her mentor, but also to her human whore.
And what, in fact, prevented Celestia from changing? Here, it seems that she screwed up and seems to be remorseful for what almost happened, so what prevented her from creating a spell blocking the overwhelming effect of her penis on her brain?
As for me, Celestia is fucking ranting about her regret, but the only thing she really regrets is her failure to get her student's virginity.
Personally, the outcome of the meeting between Twilight and Celestia is clear to me - the student will turn into another whore, while also having royal duties on her shoulders.
In conclusion, the work is undoubtedly good, however, not to my taste. A similar situation was with the work in which the Moon lay down under her own sister voluntarily, rejecting Twilight. As a result, Twilight and her friends fled Equestria, and the royal sisters will have to deal with the offspring of incest, because Luna got pregnant.
As they say, neither fluff nor feather to you, the author. All the best.

Exuno #2 · Jun 26th, 2022 · · 1 ·

good.

your weave of lust and shakey exploitable emotion is excellent as usual, and it's so hard to tell sometimes which is really supporting the other. I wish I had a concrete name for this fetish - I think your descriptions call it 'Dirty Talk', but there's such a chasm of meaning between 'you're my horny slut' and preying on specific sensitive, real mental weakpoints that have had stories worth of establishment.

cow stuff was really hot. teasing, morality free*, chattel livestock for the powerful to use, nnnf. Mary deserves to pound a hole at some point.

Mary didn’t have much time to consider what a magical braingasm would do to her

aaaaaa my weakness! please please please please, please
Why did they even go through all the elaborate stuff with Erin without just thinking of this!!

Thank you for your continued writing – I'm always worried you'll disappear without warning, like so many authors, but I'm glad your wellspring hasn't dried up, and that you're still just good. I'm not sure what's going to happen with Twilight, I'm not even sure what I would want to happen, but I am sure I won't be disappointed.

God damn, you do not miss. Every single story in this series has been better than the last.

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