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Congrats! Always feels good to finish a project.
Just got around to reading it: excellent work! A fitting end.
Very interesting that we didn't even get to see if Twilight stopped her assault on the ocean or how the negotiations ended: I guess that would have blunted things: despite the high stakes and severity of all that, it wasn't Twilight or Celestia's priority.
A masterwork of prose and psychology, this series, and kinda true about how power works in the system that presently controls our world. Can't get that far if you bother with guard rails, and it leads to stuff like this, and often eventually death, only for the cycle to continue. I look forward to whatever you may write in the future!
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Thanks for your kind words, but this isn't the end! This is only the first chapter, one of at least three. There's more to come!
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Oh I missed the "incomplete"
my bad; I look forward to see where else you take this then!
It did seem odd to have those loose ends, but I figured it could make sense in an artistic sort of way.
eeeeee this is so suspense and exciting!
I definitely feel some of the FiMC inspiration here, the Twilight who is obsessed with overcoming Celestia and has the cognitive dissonance of "No I'm better it's okay" and "well everything is her fault anyway" and just any loose justification she can cling to is great. And it's really nice to, uh, not feel like the narrative itself is buying into that this time, heh.
You said this was the final part, and I guess that's just going to be out of neccessity once everyone dies. Makes sense.
For real, I'm super excited to see whatever else you write that might not be bound by the amazing canon you've wrapped yourself in, though.
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Thanks! I'll look forward to seeing what you think of the last chapter. I'm having a lot of fun writing it.
Dang, what a ride.
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Also, if you try to commit genocide but also murder a specific person at the same time, are those separate charges or does the genocide sort of just count for both?
Asking for a friend.
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They execute you twice. Don't underestimate Celestia's brand of justice.
Another story told from Twilight's perspective in the dungeons would be amazing.
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Get out of my head. 👀
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Oh that's interesting; will Cadance try to resist her urges and improve for Celestia? Will Twilight decide to be naughty to get her to trip up now that she knows What Cadance was dealing with, but still wants some revenge for it? Whichever way you take it I'm sure it will be good.
How is this over the top fuck fest also such dramatic character progression? How?!
Like, in between all cartoonish, rapey sex, we've got characters dealing with long-rooted flaws and facing down their associated trauma. I question the methods, but the presentation of the background journey is entirely... un-clopfic-like.
It's interesting to me, for more than a thousand years, Celestia has not learned NOT to think with her cock and gives herself to her lusts at every opportunity, but she went to prison (received punishment) not a rapist and a pervert to the core, building herself a goddess, but a victim of direct rape. I'm not saying that Twilight shouldn't be punished for trying to kill the population of an entire planet, but the actions of the "Princess" should also be fairly condemned.
Wow, it has been over a year, huh!
Still not sure what to think of this resolution, honestly. It's big and dramatic and on-brand, and fuck if there aren't some amazingly hot writing in it, but...
It definitely tastes of serial fiction. Especially now, with some of your other Celestias being presented, the contrast and mixture of indulgence and integrity that ties this together is strange. Celestia wins by being strong, and I really can't tell if that aligns with the actual stated messaging and intent. And I want to think on that question, analyze your craft, care about these characters...
But I also wanna worship fat monstrous goddess rapecock and not have any thoughts in my head. Contrary reading intents, frustrating! Somewhat fun.
Still excited to see what new chapters their story might have, a few weeks ago. :p
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I'l be curious to see how this new story goes over, generally speaking. I've definitely been leaning more into the "serial fiction" side (there's an overarching theme I'm mulling over), but it's possible that I'm sacrificing the heat and degeneracy I started with on the altar of continuity...especially when it comes to Celestia's basic motivations and instincts. We'll see.
This ones's six fuckin' chapters, for some reason. I'm squaring away the last one.