Female Writer, Bisexual Writer, Smolder X Mare Crackship Connoisseur. Creator of the Smolderverse, and writer of many other kinds of clop and SFW stories (Commissions temporarily OPEN)
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Haven’t read it yet but damn! You really love Smolder!
This is interesting. Read the contained elements in the descriptions after the story and realized that it's basically a summary of the story and actually spoils every surprise in here lol.
And I'm surprised that Smolder here is the "denial" character, given your other stories where she does stuff with mares, but I'm not complaining since it was interesting. The princess of love being bisexual certainly made sense here. And The "emotions" part here did its job as well, seeing how Smolder get really aggressive And Cadance confess about being unsatisfied, And the one night stand thought part in the end was intriguing. It's thought-provoking And leaves a bait to a sequel, which is pretty cool. I also have the feeling that it progressed a little too fast and since there are already emotional elements, they should be explored more when they're not.
Keep up the nice job and have fun writing.
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That's why it has the spoiler filter over it? 😆
And she usually is in a level of denial with the other stories as well, it's just not as drama-based as this one. Glad you liked it!