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It all looping around to the bars and the fruit was pretty awesome.

Been waiting excitedly for this! But can't read it till later QQ

Missed opportunity to edge Cadance until she divulged the information, only to leave her hanging - would that be more cruel or less than what they did? Hard to say.

Bergamot? Ayahuasca? lol you're just guessing now. Though it would be dangerous for Twilight now because increased neuroplasticiity plus exposure to addictive behavior can make the addiction worse. The idea with psychadelics as therapeutics is to gain the neuroplasticity to be able to choose to change the behavior, and make it easier to commit to that choice, for at least a week or two before things set again. But that's a double edged sword if you make the wrong choice or are forced into it.

Wow, my goodness. Human and pony is a category that I do not get into, but I found your writing from ‘incest is wincest’, and this? This masterpiece is something I absolutely love! Your writing is impeccable, intricately tying in taboo elements such as narcotics and incest. Writing Twilight’s disgust and Cadence’s nightmare, the dark thoughts that brew in between the two characters and those affected by them. I am in love with how dark this whole atmosphere is, tying in the ideas of multiple victims and how this ‘holy mission’ to tell everyone about her crimes is kinda tied to Twilight’s selfishness. I am an absolute fan and it was such a gift to read your work. Thank you for publishing this! While I do not know if you’ll ever write anything that is pony-exclusive, always know that I am a fan of your writing!

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Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. If you're more into pony on pony, I'd suggest trying my story, The Dawn. That one seems to be generally well received.

I just read it, it was fantastic! Once again, the amount of details really bring it together combined with how dastardly Celestia is. Feels like it aligns with this story in terms of morbidity, so happy to have had a chance to read it!

Thank you for the recommendation! I’m afraid that I’m inexperienced in making comments in fimfiction (I typically only read), but I hope you recognize this as a response to your earlier comment!

Looking forward to more.

Not much to say here. Cadence is a predator, pure and simple.

You know, recently I've been doing a little creative exercise with this Celestia and another works character, but a quote there from those works seems relevant.

A Beast I Am, Lest A Beast I Become. Celestia, abhorrent as her acts have been, can at least admit their wretchedness and her own and is willing to change if she can and make restitution if allowed.

I just love this one, it is so hot and satisfying to see Cadance get her comeuppance now that she knows everypony will be aware that she's nothing but a fraud this whole time.
Honestly, throughout the whole series, it's like most of the main cast, Luna aside, are terrible people.
Mary definitely is, Celestia has done a LOT of bad things throughout her life and caused all this hurt to Twilight, and Twilight tried to destroy an entire planet. But Cadance really seems to outrank all of these atrocities and she's just so much more hateable than everyone else.
Having read the latest installment of this series involving Applejack, at least it seems like Cadance will be stuck for quite a while since Celestia is rather busy.
Maybe I'm wrong to speculate but I'm convinced that the helping Cadance's other victims is part of Twilight's long game to create a better class of alicorn.

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