Mary bites off more than she can screw as Twilight's claws sink deeper into Celestia's thick ass. Secrets are revealed and dark pleasures abound in Mary and Celestia's final story...for now.
I definitely feel some of the FiMC inspiration here, the Twilight who is obsessed with overcoming Celestia and has the cognitive dissonance of "No I'm better it's okay" and "well everything is her fault anyway" and just any loose justification she can cling to is great. And it's really nice to, uh, not feel like the narrative itself is buying into that this time, heh.
You said this was the final part, and I guess that's just going to be out of neccessity once everyone dies. Makes sense.
For real, I'm super excited to see whatever else you write that might not be bound by the amazing canon you've wrapped yourself in, though.
eeeeee this is so suspense and exciting!
I definitely feel some of the FiMC inspiration here, the Twilight who is obsessed with overcoming Celestia and has the cognitive dissonance of "No I'm better it's okay" and "well everything is her fault anyway" and just any loose justification she can cling to is great. And it's really nice to, uh, not feel like the narrative itself is buying into that this time, heh.
You said this was the final part, and I guess that's just going to be out of neccessity once everyone dies. Makes sense.
For real, I'm super excited to see whatever else you write that might not be bound by the amazing canon you've wrapped yourself in, though.
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Thanks! I'll look forward to seeing what you think of the last chapter. I'm having a lot of fun writing it.