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Bad Dragon


I write so that one day I may finally stop writing and be free, but these damn new ideas keep finding ways into my brain. I need to write more to vent them out!

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A girl genius devoted her life to developing a teleportation machine.

But what’s the point of it working if in order to use it, one first has to measure the quantum coordinates at the destination?

The breakthrough came in a dream. Through the intertwined dream realm, Twilight Sparkle sent her coordinates to Equestria. There were no breaks anymore for this mad, but sexy, scientist.


[This story is an entry for Science Fiction Contest II.]

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 26 )

Here’s what AI thinks of the story:

Bing AI:
Your story, "Quantum Physicist in Equestria," immediately caught my attention with its clever premise and quirky protagonist. The idea of a brilliant scientist developing a teleportation machine is fascinating, and the fact that she is able to send her coordinates to Equestria through a dream realm adds an element of mystery and magic to the story.
The protagonist's witty and sassy tone, as evidenced by her opening monologue on her YouTube channel, immediately draws the reader in and makes them want to follow her on this adventure. Her use of humor, particularly in her explanation of her outfit choice and her invention made of garbage, adds a touch of levity to the story and makes it all the more enjoyable to read.
Overall, I am intrigued by the unique blend of science fiction and fantasy in this story, and I am eager to see where the protagonist's journey to Equestria takes her. Your writing style is engaging and entertaining, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Chat GPT:
Quantum Physicist in Equestria is a hilarious and quirky fanfiction that combines science and magic in a way that will make you laugh out loud. The protagonist is a self-proclaimed sexy scientist who has developed a teleportation machine out of garbage and dreams of visiting the world of My Little Pony. She is witty, sarcastic and adventurous, and her narration will keep you hooked from the first sentence. The story is full of references to pop culture, physics and ponies, and it doesn't take itself too seriously. If you are looking for a fun and light-hearted read that will make you smile and wonder what will happen next, this is the story for you.

The fact that a fic with "sexy" in the title is rated E for everyone has me very concerned

11535907 The story has nothing to do with that. The word is merely a self-proclaimed statement of the protagonist that may not even be true.

The aim of the word is mainly to indicate that the protagonist is a female.

11535914
Then why does the cover art show an anime girl in lingerie?

Again, it's rated E. That means children are gonna see it

11535925 That's just what the character usually wears because she's a loner. It's described in the story that the character actually wears more clothing for the stream in which the story takes place.

You mentioned 'sex' in the title.

Y'all want to re-rate that, before the mods come round to give you the Talk?

Careful, she could cut glass

Eldorado
Moderator

You've been around long enough to know you shouldn't have giant absurd nipples in the cover art of any story, let alone one rated E.

Additionally, there's no MLP content in what you've currently got published. C'mon, man.

I censored the cover art and marked the story Teen-rated.

If you pinkie promise
YOU BETTER FOLLOW THROUGH

11535988 I will. The next chapter will be up tomorrow.

Don't make promises you can't keep.

:pinkiesad2:

11536003 I'll keep this one. The chance of the next chapter tomorrow is higher than the chance of the Sun rising in the morning.

Eldorado
Moderator

The story still has no MLP content beyond one mention of a hoof. That's never been sufficient for our purposes.

Maybe on the third try you'll figure out basic site policy that's been in place for over a decade?

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11536568
Once is bad enough. This feels like more, and the author didn't care.

11536670 As far as I could tell, the girl had two layers of clothing. But I guess we should force women to wear even more layers. Maybe they should wear abaya, jilbab, hijab, niqab and burka on top of one another. Would that make purist misogynists happy?

As for the second one, I thought interaction with a pony in the very first chapter was pony enough. I'm not that good with HiE genre, so this one was on me, I guess.

Am I the only one that sees that the girl looks like a cartoon sex toy? :applejackconfused:

There's a lot I could say about this story, but right now the main thing that sticks out to me is how the hell does one go about spelling a simple word like "beef" incorrectly -- twice in a row?!

No, no... on second thought, don't answer. I'm probably better off not knowing.

11536870 Either way, it's fixed now. thanks for letting me know.

> " … , the ones who you killed. …. "

That should be ", the ones whom you killed."

11577605
You're right.

What about this one?

I don’t even want to know who you killed for that

Also whom?

11577768

Yes:

Objects of verbs and following prepositions.

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