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"For her last trick, The Great and Powerful Trixie will disappear... forever."
Around the time the Season 6 finale of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic was finishing production, there was another episode that went under everyone's radar.
Inspired by Red Mist Re-Take and Mouse.avi Re-Take, both by vibingleaf.
High quality verions of the screenshots used in the story can be found here and here. They were made lower quality for authenticity.
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Can’t wait for more!
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oh i forgot to mark the story as "complete" 💀
sorry if this is disappointing, but that's the only chapter.
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Oof, but hey! It’s still a good story! Maybe you can make a sequel?
Either way, still a good story! Nice art work that you did with it btw!
oh man this was good. more emotional than most creepypastas but the floating twilight head scene was very evocative.
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Thanks! That's exactly what I was hoping to achieve. "Feelspasta" is a word I've seen sometimes used for more emotional creepypastas, so I suppose this could fall under that category.
Me thinks Starlight Knew something about Twilight regarding Trixie, if her attitude and the screenshot were anything to go by
This was actually pretty well-written, and the screenshot actually kinda helps sell the authenticity of it.
Well done, this was actually pretty good. Haven't been this interested in a creepypasta-esque story like this in a while, and while it was more of a Feelspasta, I still loved it.
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Maybe in the future, though if I do it probably will take place in-universe rather than be written like a lost episode creepypasta.
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Let’s gooo!
Uh, Twilight didn't challenge Trixie. Spike was talking big about her but Twilight just walked away.
Edit: Thanks for clearing that up.
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The "unicorn with a purple mane" was referring to Rarity, I should have made it more clear, sorry about that. It's been fixed now.
Classic, just like the old Lost Episode Creepypastas from back in the day, got such a nostalgia charge!
This was amazing, and I legit thought it was a true story (perhaps it is who knows?) can't wait for a sequel and thanks for writing this!
Ahhh the good old lost episode story’s, loved them and still do.
This was fantastic!
Maybe one day you could do a one shot that shows the aftermath?
When people needed him the most, he came back with another unexpected banger
This is one of the best lost episode creepypastas I've read but maybe because I'm biased because it's something MLP related.
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Perhaps one day. Rereading my own story made me depressed and now I kind of want that lmao.
Honestly, this story was based off how I've always seen Trixie, someone who wants others to tell her how great she is because she herself doesn't believe it. Despite getting one friend, Trixie never really seemed happy. Two things she said in No Second Prances really stuck out to me, well, that and... you know.
The way the show treated her was... frankly, kind of gross.
Okay
This was an interesting read. Nice story and was a nice experienced. . Poor Starlight, poor Trixie too. But dang, she was rightfully traumatised after finding her friend like that!
Never had a story made me this emotional. You geniually have great writing skills and combine that with trixie being my favourite pony right behind apple bloom, just straight up made me cry.
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Thanks! She's one of my favorites too. And I'm sorry for making you cry, although I suppose that was kind of my intention.
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Nah, you don't have to be sorry.
I've been commissioned for a reading of this story, I hope you enjoy it!
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Oh shit, that's sick! Thanks man, and I hope you enjoyed my cheesy little story, haha.
Very feels.
Your story is cool as fuck bruh, I love the way you portrayed Trixie's character in this.
Also, this inspired me to write a Trixie-based story of my own lol
Creepypasta moment
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spooky spaghetti