Celestia receives a letter from Twilight, shocking her into action.
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A bit dark, but good story nonetheless!
Well written, I do wish it was explained or hinted why Twilight felt the way she did, but it's still a good read.
Boy howdy did I pick a good story to read this morning. Now my cereal is ruined
Random? Surely not! And I can see a messed-up Twilight being all broken up like that, even if you did leave out the reason of her emotional upset in the first place. Nevertheless, it is a tale that does jerk a tear or two. Have a like and a moustache:
If any are confused as to why Twilight is like this, I recommend that you read the sequel, which delves into the why.
I Felt some desperation while Celestia was trying to reach Twilight on time. Doesnt matters in which state you are, you can always recover from It. And Celestia knew she Just needed to be fast enough to not let Twilight do something she would regret forever. Great story.
I am confused as to what wrong with twilight. She did something bad to herself and I know what her problem is. ( or I think I know what her problem is ). What I am confused about is if her problem effect every pony she interacts with or just the ponies she interacts the most ?
Honestly this is a well written story. So good my eye shat a tear
. Good story though
I don't know why but I think the reactions of the others was to much for me, as soon as I saw AJ pop up and what she was about to say, I
had to bite the side of my cheek before the reflex to slam my fist into my laptop's screen came to mindinternally screamed. Now don't get me wrong I love when there's a lot of reactions in stories but this one just seemed.... sour like I couldn't get myself to read their reactions I managed to get a glimpse of what Pinkie was talking about because I scrolled down when I saw AJ's reaction and I instantly scrolled down to skip her reaction along with the others a well, I'm going to try to at least read one of their reactions and read it like a man11632731
I have not once written Applejack before this fic, and it would help immensely if I could get some clues on how Applejack speaks and acts. (I don't watch the show extensively)
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. Again such an interesting story you have written.
AJ is quite a tricky character to write about, starting with the country accent of course and with how the way she acts. Sometimes people overdue the accent or sometimes they completely remove the accent but that's ok as long as you keep her personality, which is, honesty, bravery, and mostly a caring pony (98% of the time). With this in mind I'm sure people will understand who you are trying to write about and may even help out. Me, myself, honestly I'm afraid I won't be much use for this question sadly but I'm sure someone else who knows Apple Jack well will be able to help out, and if you can't find help, this might sound really.... sketchy but google is always a second option. Oh and don't get me wrong, I'm not saying I didn't like the way you made AJ react, in general I just internally cringed, not that the reactions were bad, no they really were interesting, but to me honestly I'm just a drama queen sometimes when I read dramatic or sad or dark stories
Amazing story with a good ending, I like dark stories but only if there's a good ending although I do have 1 quastion, wasn't teleporting an option? Celestia knows where the library is, she could have easily teleported to her unless you want to use the reason that Celestia was under stress and wasn't thinking straight as her one goal was to reach Twilight as fast as possible.
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I would much rather use the idea that teleportation requires some level of focus, and with very stressful event occurring, even Princess Celestia would find it hard to focus enough to teleport. And, yes, Celestia's one goal was to reach Twilight under any circumstances, and that's why she wasn't afraid to break the sound barrier to reach her student.
Also,
There's this in the story.
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Thank you.