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Things from the past come jump up, kick back, whip around and spin in style That's my motto!

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This holiday season is the worst time of Sunset's life. Anon-a-miss has made everyone believe that she has returned to her old ways and is now the target of everyone in the school.

Having just about enough pain and suffering Sunset tries to end it all but is saved and brought back to place where she can recover by an unlikely counterpart.

Now with the peace in the dark and guidance of the light, will Sunset prove her innocence to Canterlot High and even perhaps fulfill a dream she had long accepted would never come true.

(For those who read the MLP IDW comics, there will slight references here and there, so be warned)

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Comments ( 49 )

Applejack needs a punch in the face!

nice work look forward to more and welcome back:twilightsmile:

Does this story have anything to do with RWBY?

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What makes you ask that?

Pretty sure i have read this before.

“Girls, please You have to believe me! I could never hurt any of you!” Sunset begged as she looked at them pleadingly, “I-I love you.” Fluttershy trembled before she sent a hateful but tearful glare at Sunset.

Is shipping I smell

Because if it is going to be in this story then let the shipping commence.


But seriously did she mean as in love her as a friend or love her as in love love her.

And if it’s the second one she does still love her right?

“And we’ll be keeping this, so you can’t try and trick princess Twilight too! So if you're smart you’ll leave and never come back!” Applejack said, then readjusted her hat and walked away with the book under her arm as Sunset weakly reached for it. The girls followed behind the cowgirl with Rainbow sending Sunset a warning glare, Rarity huffed and flipped her hair before turning her chin to the ceiling, Pinkie just stuck her tongue at Sunset and Fluttershy followed in the back as her glare melted into a sorrowful expression as she turned to the Sunset was looking down at the floor with her eyes closed trying not to breakdown and the timid girl mouthed, “I’m so sorry.” before rushing after her friends.

Please tell me flutter shy will break off from them and get the book back from applejack and rekindle their friendship or maybe develop something more once or if she does?

Applejack really needs some common sense knocked through her VERY thick headed skull, the same thing can be said about the other girls and I just know for a fact that when Princess Twilight learns what they and the entire school has been doing to Sunset, there will be TARTARUS to pay for their actions!!!

Keep up the good work.

So far I'm like the story very strong first chapter

So when’s the next chapter going to be released or your working on it soon?

Again just curious is all

Ok, with the Rainbooms, several lines have been crossed. The abuse may be bad enough, but theft of personal property is a step too far. I don't care what they believe she's done, they have no right to do that, no matter their intentions and I think Princess Twilight can make her own discernment, thank you very much. Plus, if they want her gone and to never come back, how is she supposed to know of the portal is open or not so she can retreat to Equestria?

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Same, I'm getting déjà vu...

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I mean, it's like the thousandth or so Anon-a-Miss story on the site, innit?

11381515
Yeh, this looks like a straight up copy.
Even the bagheera bit is in there . . .

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Actually the original chapter of that story was written by me as a favor for the author.

11381875
What story exactly? I remember reading this somewhere but can't quite place where (hence the déjà vu)

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I wasn't referring to Anon-a-miss fics in general, but this specific story (or at least this chapter) in particular

Good to have you back, buddy! I'm guessing Sunset will never forgive her friends! Ever! And My Little Ninjago: When Realms Unite isn't cancelled, right?

father of shadow & mother of light And a brother of green
(Hahah when I saw name of this I just had to include this this story is going to be very interesting I'm going to keep up very good eye on this one)

OHHOO!!! Look at this!!! I new story just Arrived.😁

Wonder when we’ll get an update to this as I love the first chapter

Ohhh I can’t wait to see how this story goes mor please🙏🏻😍

waiting for the next chapter

Already loving the story. Patiently waiting for the next chapter now. Also, I could definitely see Philomena being a peacock.

Looks interesting. Added to my read list. :twilightsmile:

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I do agree past me but knowing the knowledge that I know now who's to stop the author from looking at this and laughing maybe I'll run into this comment again and reread this again and reply to this again green

I think this is first Sunset story where Sombra is not only mentioned but looking to be a pretty prominent character.

Oh com'on! When will this story continue?, I'm always read this story, again again and again.

So when the next chapter?

I'm still waiting for the chapter of this beautiful story. I hope the story was not abandoned

hope to continue soon !

Hii! Is there going to be another chapter ? I'm very, very excited to read it if it happens! (I hope you will answer me-)

Sombra/Celestia? That’s an unusual pairing, but I ship it!

After reading the author’s notes, I see why it’s such an unusual pairing to me: I have never read the IDW comics…

This is a good story so far, hope the next chapter(s) comes out fairly soon please, I and everybody else would really like to know how the next chapter's go

Reread. Still awesome. Looking forward to more. :twilightsmile:

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Asking stupid questions is literally the only thing that user does it seems.

I need chapter 2! I gotta see Sunset being angry and sad and lashing out at the girls! Rejecting their apologies!

MORE PLEASE I NEED IT!!!!:fluttercry:

Pleasee Harryy, don't abandoning this storyy:fluttershysad: and I hope you continued The Sun-sational Surfers story againn

COME BACK PLEASE!!!!!

Are you continuing this? :applejackconfused::pinkiesad2:

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I will, just started work on it

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No rush, my friend! Glad to see your work is still fantastic as ever!

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Agreed! What she said was UNACCEPTABLE!

Comment posted by BlazingShogun deleted Dec 22nd, 2023

I'm so very sorry, but is chapter 2 coming out soon? 😥

Are you continuing this? :pinkiesad2: :trixieshiftright:

Will you continue this? I really love the story

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