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HarryBuilder


Things from the past come jump up, kick back, whip around and spin in style That's my motto!

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Many moons ago, Equestria was protected by Seven Brave knights of Might, Courage, Optimism, Compassion, Wisdom, Patience and Honor who battled alongside the Royal Sisters: The Swords of Justice.

But these great heroes were lost when Nightmare Moon rose to power and all memory of these Knights was wiped from Equestrian History.

Until Now...

Join Midnight Shadow, Blaze Burst, Storm Belt, Hydro Wave, Rocky Roader, Volt Havoc and Arbor Greenly. As they fight alongside the Mane 7 to protect their homeland from the source of Luna’s fall to Darkness.

But can these boys and girls set aside their differences and work together, or will they and all of Equestria fall before an even greater evil yet to return.

(Story is set after Rainbow Rocks and Sunset Comes back To Equestria and becomes the Element of Empathy)

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 40 )

The concept of the knights seem interesting

Since Sunset is gonna be a Element Bearer in Equestria, will Spike become one too?(Especially since he kind of did in the series finale of the show)

Great chapter, awesome start and these seven stallion knights are gonna be really interesting and exciting to read

Sunset Comes back To Equestria

Where can I read this story?

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Seeing as the author said Mane 7, not 8, and the lack of Spike's character tag...

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Meant like later on

If there is stuff planned for him too

Thanks for mention me buddy, and I’m happy to help anytime

Oof, the girls were quite outmatched


Seeing how Spike wasn't part of the fight there, is he gonna be able to be part of the battles too or is he sadly going to be sidelined hard from the fights/chosen ones stuff?

do my little ninjago next, i wanna see how the fight with the S.O.G is like

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Or the author can do whatever they want next, and not give in to demands from other users.

11659173 right, thank you, its just its been a while

Another chapter finished, and don’t let those negative comments get to you, ignore them, this is your story, you do what you need to do, and this is really great and interesting

This was a big chapter alright, but it was worth it, and it’s great and showed a certain turn of events, awesome job

I am surprised Daybreaker is showing up, and this soon too.
Hoping Blueblood gets a huge thrashing.

If the Knights are going to be shipped with each of the Mane 7, whats gonna happen with Spike since he has a crush with Rarity?
He's gonna end up heartbroken. If thats the case, I hope its not brushed/left unresolved for him(especially since Rarity was basically taking advantage of his crush on her)

“A castle that I had to do all the cleaning.” Spike muttered in annoyance.

“What was that, Spike?” Twilight questioned while turning his head towards her assistant with a brow.

“Nothing!” Spike quickly said as he gave a nervous smile.

This.. feels like an issue that shouldn't be ignored

“Yeah, they aren’t claws. And to point out another example, when I was there, I wasn’t a dragon.” Spike called out with his arms folded. “I was a dog. A talking dog.” He grumbled.

And this is an issue that I hope gets addressed
Since EQG really screwed him over by making him a dog, especially with how it made no sense(and Diamond DOGS were humans)
It stuck him labeled as a pet

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I thought of that Crush part, and Don’t worry, sometimes in real life crushes don’t always work out, and if Spike does love Rarity he’ll want her to be happy.

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Unless Spike lets go on his own accord beforehand instead of he has to since it turns out Rarity is into someone else, it will just come off as him getting screwed. Especially if its just left off like that.
(And the fact that Rarity basically used his crush to her advantage on a bunch of occasions)

Spike frowned in insult, “Hey, Dragon. DRA-GON!” He stressed as he raised his claws before folding his arms, “Not lizard. I don’t do that tongue thing!” He then stuck his tongue out them.

Love the Mulan reference.

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Hey, this is my story and I decide how it works, so please whatever I decide to do with Spike, accept it.

And the Royal Guards are as dum (or should that be panicky?) as ever ...

And as Nightmare isn't dum, Sol isn't going to face the rainbow easily ...

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Still it would come off as screwing him over though..

I just hope it isn't brushed off/left unresolved..

Oy, HarryBuilder, aren't you forgetting something to add to your Author's Note again?

By the way nice chapter.

Daymare sure packs a punch.

Didn't think that there would be a plot point of it looks like Twilight has a past life too

Though really bummed that Spike is gonna be stuck as a helpless hostage that needs rescuing for the rest of the conflict with Daymare..
It just rubs it in that he's screwed since he's not one of the "chosen ones"

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Dude, the spike thing, let it go already

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Dude has a "Spike has to be important and useful in every story" obsession. As in, he does nothing but complain when Spike isn't useful and important in a story.

So I doubt he ever will let it go 🙄.

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Thanks for the heads-up.

Like the chapter by the way, certainly did a great job.

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I just can't though since its eating at me
Sorry..

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Look, I love Spike too, but he doesn't need to have an important role in a story to be important to the girls, so please drop it.

Arbor sighed and laid down on his belly while Fluttershy laid next to him, "The ponies of my village didn't really see amazement or wonder of my skills. They thought I was a warlock of some kind and treated me as an outcast until I was kicked out of the village. Which causes me to wander around Equestria on my own.” He revealed while giving a sadden expression.

Nah. Arbor is more like a druid if you ask me.

Dang it, Blueblood! I'm gonna wring your neck for this cliffhanger.

“ You may now refer to me as Daymare Sol. ” Daymare announced as she gave a small smile. “ The more better, prettier and powerful version of your dear Celestia. ” She said after flipping her fiery mane and giving an evil expression and pointing at Luna.

I kinda thought that you would use Daybreaker, but this is your story, so you do you I guess.

Why do I get a Nibiru (Mystery Incorporated) feeling from the day of vengeance and the 8 planets thing?

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But he will just be getting the short end of the stick hard here though..
Its just eating at me a bunch

Sorry..

Not bad, HarryBuilder.

Very nice job.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Now this is the stuff of legend, an epic struggle, the very place where heroes and heroines are born.

This could be their finest hour yet.

Finally managed to read the new chapter
(Took me a bit due to nervousness and also it's hard to do stuff on my phone, since someone stolen the wifi router so I had to hop onto my phone)

I am glad seeing Spike helped Luna broke out
And I am surprised he gotten armor too
(The armors sounded really cool)
And seeing his feelings on what happened at the wedding was interesting

And seeing what's really going on that is linked to that incident at the wedding sounds good.

Now that's what I call a fierce battle.

And nice TLK ( 2019 ) reference, HarryBuilder.

Two thumbs up!

Like the battle 💪 but I prefer Daybreaker in my opinion

If each of the 8 mysterious figures will go with each pair of Elements/Swords who will get the 8th since theirs only 7 pairs?

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