Back from the dead, n retreating back :catthumbsup:
[UPDATING DESCRIPTION 13/1/24]
Fiasco ensures when Sunset drinks water from... a rather weird-looking flask.
May include a small crossover, but you'd barely notice lmao.
Comes with a blogpost clarifying a few things here, since there's a lot of confusion.
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Having read this chapter, I can definitely say that this fic is gonna be a good read for those who will partake in it. I, myself, am eagerly looking forward to your next chapter. Until then, mellonin.
The idea is really nice but the how she got turned into a baby or child seems a little random, and the grammar could be better.
But still I hope to see more.
Still think Twilight should been more harsh on the other girls, as it was said since Octi and Rainbow defended her got targeted as well.
Ok. Five is not a baby or toddler. Its kindergarten. So maybe 2 or 3 years old. That would work.
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Haha, thanks for the enthusiasm! I'll try to post chapters soon in the future.
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I had to keep some "Gacha Logic" in the story. And yes, it is random, because that's how the logic works.
And I'd keep her harsh if this wasn't an E rated story.
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Sorry I didn't know. But I had to make a plot where Sunset is too young to use electronics but old enough to talk and walk and understand properly.
I'll note it, thanks for the suggestion!
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Yeah, you need to know that babies is just an umbrella term. You have newborn, infant, toddler, etc...So, 3 years old would be the best bet.
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Until then, mellonin.
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Well looking forward to more cute moments with little Sunset.
I ask though that Celestia brings the hammer down hard on the students for how they attacked Octi and Rainbow and Sunset, I still think Twilight was too easy on the others.
I mean bad enough they turn their backs on Sunset but if they knew about all three being harasshed and attacked and did nothing?
Oh does anyone else hope that Little Sunset calls Celestia mommy?
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Ya, I totally forgot to mention.
When I said "being targeted by the school", I meant by mocking them or getting into minor quarrels or small verbal confrontations. No physical violence here.
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It's a secret.
Oh dear God this is fucking cute
This adorable. I kinda hope Celestia gets to take care of little Sunset, mainly because I love Momlestia stories
Truthfully I don't know what to think about this🤔 Its not bad but the last 4th wall breaking for me was a bit unnecessary like if you didn't put it in there the story flow is still going to be fine🤭 Though if you really want to add 4th wall breaking in the story just stick to Pinkie being the only one to do it.
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Lol my story, my logic.
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Lol my comment my opinion you don't have to follow it🤭
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I don't care what anybody says, this is a great story, one that I hope will be continued.
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Thanks!
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It's a secret.
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Chill! They are kidding.
And yes, it will be continued, as soon as I get enough time.
when is the next chapter ?
I like to see little Sunset run into Sci Twi, can see her become attached to Sci Twi hugging her leg giggling.
Sci Twi be so confused but dawwing over her.
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Sorry, but this story is currently on hiatus 😅
Do you mean risers
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I think?
Sorry, I really dunno, but thanks for telling!
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Quick question how old are you because I’ve known this since I was in third grade
Oh dear wha happend!? Why you cancelled NOOO!
Well looks like another potentially good one goes down to the graveyard again😭 any chance this might continue and the cancelled status be thanos snapped from existence?
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LMAO I’M GOING TO CONTINUE ON THE STORY NOW SORRY BRO 😭-
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One word " YES!"
Who? Also THANK GOD! So this is gonna continue, I thought its gonna be in the graveyard like many other great fics before it🤣
Am I missing something?
Am I missing something? Is she part of their friend group?
Seriously, they ain't that frickin heartless. Otherwise, they get in REAL trouble with Principle Celestia/Vice-Principle Luna, and the police.
I wasn't expecting this today. Why did you have to delay my sleep?
Oh well. Welcome back
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That is a spoiler for the next chapter.
But I think it's too obvious.
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I'm sorry about this, okay?? 😭
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Don't ask. 💀
Old me from 2 years ago decided it was best to add a second party, so she chose Octavia and the other ponies/people who get more screentime or have more recognition or something into this story, and I'm too tired to rewrite the entire fucking chapter. Nahh, I ain't redoing a 2k-words chapter
Let's just assume Octavia and the Rainbooms are good friends.✌
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Like I said before, I have no idea what I intended for the plot— this is like, an almost two-year old story I nearly cancelled. I just remember wanting to keep this story E-rated.
Plus, since MLP and Equestria Girls themselves are made for mostly the younger audience, I guess it would be safe to assume that by "being an easy target" Dash meant that Sunset could be easily taken advantage of (like teasing, shoving, that's it. I just hope this wasn't misunderstood though, sorry about that!).
Just- no violence included in here. Geez, y'all Anon-a-Miss fic authors should really get less melodramatic and give this girl a break, she's just made good name from the musical showcase in Rainbow Rocks— she doesn't deserve this 😭
Great to see this updated!
What is your upload schedule
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It's nonexistant 💀
If my daily schedule itself is a mess. then god knows how I could even maintain my upload schedule, sorry.
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It’s okay
Are you doing more?
I hope the author and story return. Great start.
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Once I get enough time, yes.
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I must apologize on my behalf. Thing is, it's been a stressful high school year, and where I'm from, my current year is the most important year for a variety of reasons regarded to studies. So I have not gotten time to write lately, my bad
Don't worry, I'll try to update the story as fast as I can!
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The story is added to my read list. Plan on sticking around for a long time. Trust me, school is very important. Hope all is going good for you.
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Thank you for understanding ^^
And I'm honored. I will update soon :D