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wishcometrue


Hatch opens, stark light

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Fiddlesticks's life had been dull for years, and she always knew what to expect. Then she met Lightning Dust.


Third Place in the FiddleDust Contest.

Thanks to mushroompone, Seer, and Undome Tinwe for editing.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

Oh dang. I liked the way that chapter finished. Interesting conflict. Will Read on when I have time.

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Glad you enjoyed it, and I hope the rest of the chapters can live up to expectations!

Great so far, will finish later

Said a lot of this during the editing but wow, what a piece, Wish.
Your lightning Dust here is one of your best pieces of character writing to date, she's so well realised and her interactions with Fiddlesticks are just an absolute joy to read
The central couple of chapters here form some of your best work to date, it almost makes me relieved I wasn't able to enter this contest as I certainly wouldn't fancy having to compete with this!
Great stuff!

Quick resolution to the first chapters conflict makes me think something is there. That's why lightning was testy eyed maybe? I could be wrong. Nice chapter.

Finished! (Actually finished days ago but forgot to write a comment)
This was a nice sweet romance. I could connect with Fiddlestick's frustration and it was nice seeing a more chill Lightning.

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that, uh, kinda came out of nowhere <.<

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