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The Red Parade
Cars are still parked outside. If the rapture had happened, why was it unrecognizable? Why was the sky blue? Why did no one tell me? Do these things not announce themselves?
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The correct plural of "body" is "bodies", not "bodys". I'm assuming English isn't your first language.
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https://youtu.be/NvsQPCbgJOA
But while we're at it, punctuation marks go on the inside of quotation marks not the outside :P
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lol who c ares
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how DARE too this he mocked my dear good Frend Under. GOD Almighty RED PARADE for him bad england!. meand RED parade been in te sameengland class for many years, we tries so so hard;: but englid is UNPOSSIBLE to learned..Our teacher get so Anger RAGE when we rights the wrongwords but we cant helped it!!!!Red Parade me our familys move many kilomm no..money to get from tetch class England school,no spoken Enger before But now studier all nights to get goods at ENGLANDbut rules not make SENSENS!!!Me and Red PRade, we sticks trough ita ll.We pass theEngland class finally but still some peoples luagh,,,under the Word of GOD do not judge, we works so hard to becomeFLUENTERs!, be nicers to indivudula wo is learned new LANGUAGES, its hard enough witout the MOCKINGS!!!!who are jus jelous of our PESREVERANCE!!!
body BODIES bodys al te same..,it it's wit theGLORY of God i wil nobe kin Assept you'rs nowlidg to. Taeke into my persom fo further submisons."
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I don't know what you're on, but it's probably illegal.
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oh my Dere Friend,I am SHOCK to hear to say yousuch a thing!.. You implying mae an RED parade does the illegals??I tells u trut. . we lifes a pure HOLY lifes, studies the Biblesto aquisitoin te England. yOu must bes confusions from some ODER PERSENS drugz yous ons,causing paranoid DELUSINOs!!! I prays PRYAS te holy fater cleanses your MIND and BODYS fo desses false accusingz . May te GOOD LORD ALMIGHTY show you de light oaf day and te trute. path FREE of hallucinztiun and disRespect towaards persons struuglining to learns anoda lanuage .I wishes ou well in YUOA recoferies from whateva susstance clouding ua jugements!.
Nice story!
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This was really cute! Rainbow's complaining thoughts felt like a bit much, but jealousy will do that.
dang Twilight and Rarity are really eating crackers to Rainbow here, it seems
such an Applejack way to retort, love it!
dang, she is really disassociating!
it is a cool sentence but is Daring Do really the thing to think of? read another book, Rainbow!
yeah… she is being that obvious here!
classic Rainbow
so true. and Rarity must really like Rainbow after such a line!
doesn’t seem like a waste of time now, does it, Rainbow?
i’m guessing the title is another song title reference, and such a strange one to fit the context of a story, but you made it work! bodies, Rainbow’s clumsiness, the odd spelling, it all goes together. thank you for writing!
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its called Bodys because this is based on a song called "Bodys" by Carseat Headrest
edit: ah never mind the author already responded but might as well let you know for a second time
And i knoooow that i don't talk a lot, but i knooow that you don't care a lot. As long as we move our bodies around a lot we'll forget that we forgot how to talk
Saw the title, read the brief description under the recommendation then opened it and saw I was right about it being Car Seat Headrest. Indeed Rarity those are you got some nice shoulders. Love how Rainbow was, very fun and silly story