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It's a very special day...
Two of the luckiest mares in Ponyville are getting married.
Just who could I be talking about...




As if you don't know.


A big thank you to Tchernobog and Lycan_01 for being awesome editors, and Jackie for the awesome cover art

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That was beautiful. :fluttercry:

:ajsmug::ajsmug::ajsmug::ajsmug::ajsmug: / :rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

5 AJs out of 5 Rainbow Dashes

DbzOrDie actually writing something? I didn't think I'd live to see the day! I quite enjoyed this and would like to see more from you. In particular, the thing with Celestia intrigues me... I'm wondering just what happened there.

Beautiful, funny and sweet. I would love to see more from you, Mr. Author! :ajsmug:

Cool. It managed to keep a smile on my face the whole time. You are now being watched by me. :ajsmug:.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm pretty sure each other is two words. And there are a couple of instances where it changes tense randomly....

Other than that, very good! I like it and I will fave!

:moustache:

Oh my Celestia! DbsOrDie, you wrote a fan fiction, and it is about AppleDash. Instant favorite and like!iambrony.jsmart.web.id/mlp/gif/132603980888s.gif?1327826490

I'll be sure to read this later!

The Pic alone is worth it getting featured. The writing makes it worth 10 features.
4.5 Mustaches out of 5, because one of those sentences looks really weird.
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

A seriously great set of vows there.

WOW! That was MUCH better than I thought it would be! Favoriting this one!

:ajsmug::heart::rainbowkiss: FOREVER!

:flutterrage: MOAR:fluttershyouch: i mean if thats ok

I got here BEFORE IT WAS FEATURED, because this shit will get featured,
If you dont mind, im going to run off and cuddle with Derpy
*Scampers away*

My heart, I'm not sure if it exploded or melted from love :ajsmug::heart::rainbowkiss:

Appledash? Insta-fav.

Tis beutious :fluttercry:

You know? for a kids' show you bronies really like to think of them as lesbians...:facehoof:

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for a kid's show, with 90% female ponies, how could they not be lesbians :pinkiehappy:

1328661 YEEEAH that's it! I mean, I though it was because it's a show for little girls and little girls are not interested in romance stories BUT the belief that they are lesbians makes much more logic:twilightsmile:... ....
...

:facehoof:

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What do you mean, little girls aren't interested in romance stories? Doesn't Rarity's 'prince charming' tale sound familiar to the dreams of every little girl? And even though it's a children's cartoon, most bronies are not. :pinkiehappy:
And we like our romance
and since we can't give one stallion nine mares, and since the Mane six are all mares, Lesbianism was born :pinkiegasp:

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What if you just happen to think that certain characters are gay/bi? Are we allowed to do that? :applejackunsure:

1328867 O...K...
Look I already have several weeks with an arrow on the knee from these stories, so I let you get away with it.:ajbemused:

it just bothers me that seems that on this fandom heterosexuals romances are seen as something stupid, pointless AND unnatural

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It's not unnatural, it's just that there's only one stallion for every 9 mares.
And there isn't nearly enough Mane 6 / stallion interaction to build a convincing relationship on.

The few ponies who had managed to hold back their tears during my vows could no longer do so, and tissues were passed around rapidly upon hearing the warmth and love in Applejack’s words.

I managed to resist till these lines. Then manly tears were shed. :fluttercry:

Here, pal, get a moustache or two :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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You know, I already commented on this, but have another notification because I have a question for you.

What did you hope to accomplish with this post? You saw the cover image, so you could have guessed that people reading this fic don't have a problem with lesbian ponies. So was that comment supposed to convince someone to stop? Make us/DbzOrDie feel bad for it? Make some author somewhere rush out and write a het ship to fix this gross discrepancy? Why post this observation here, on one particular f/f ship fic?

I'm seriously curious what makes people post stuff like this on fics.

Oh Luna, you made a fic! this is so awesome! It's so friggin funny to see so many bronies thinking the same thing I was thinking (Oh No! DbzOrDie actually stopped reading and started writting! We're doomed, get to the life-boats!)

JK, Love the story, and love your reading and supporting Dbz, keep on rocking.

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My friend, let it go. Haters gonna hate, we all just gotta love and tolerate. This is a happy story, one that should not be sullied with an angry debate or accusations.

To you sir author. I salute you. The feels, they were great. The vows of Applejack and her Mate were poetic. and RD's reaction was indeed normal for a groom (After seeing a brother in-law, and several friends get married off to their wives i'm familiar with the sight.)

You sir earn a triple stache. wear it proudly. :moustache::moustache::moustache:

I saw the officiator first. Strange how she looked so familiar, even though I’d never seen her before. Celestia insisted that they’d handle all the stuff themselves. In fact, she reminded me a bit of Celestia, only pink, and much smaller. But she had the same loving look the Princess always wore. Maybe she was a relative?

"Atec Seli, what kind of a name is that?"

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After reading this story, I feel a very special song is needed to add even more sadness and daaaaaw-fulness to such a delightful atmosphere:

Atec Seli. Cute. Not many good anagrams for Celestia, I suppose.

Atec Seli... I don't get it. :unsuresweetie:

No one denies Celestia. No one :trollestia:
On a slightly different note, I seriously think you could write the events leading up to this moment and make one heck of a fanfic.
"science ponies isn't about asking why. it's about asking why not!"

D'awwww :ajsmug:

There is a great deal of potential in this shipping

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try reading the letters in this order:

A t e c S e l i
8 6 2 1 5 4 3 7

This is good. Not perfect, but very good. Dash feels very real.

Alright, you caught my eye. I've read a few paragraphs, and will be back tomorrow sometime to drop you some advice on stuffs and shit. LMK if you want a new post or just to edit this one (affects if you get a notification or not)

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doesn't really matter
whatever floats your boat works for me :pinkiehappy:

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each other is the correct one but eachother reads better and is pronounced like that :pinkiehappy:

1328425 That .gif is just fantastic! I wish to use it for many occasions such as this, but how? Please, enlighten me, good sir!

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A wiseguy huh?
Why I outta...
:pinkiesmile:

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Just trying to help someone who didn't get it. Besides, I didn't outright say where her name came from. ;-)
If you want, I can delete the post.

I completely blew over that Atec Seli part, then scrolled back to look at the letters when Dash mentioned she looked like Celestia. Had the biggest 'I see what you did there' face when I figured it out.

Atec Seli, yeah right. I wonder how she convinced Twilight not to tell on her.:twilightoops::trollestia:

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As a matter of fact, it's 64,8% Female Character (60 of them) and 35,2% Male Characters(48 of them) in the show.

The male ones are just so rarely spotted it feels like 90% Females.

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Its Celestia's name jumbled up

Atec Seli. .... Clever Girl.... >_>

1328661 very true and My Feels.... You Have Found Them! Good Show!

Celestia has learnt a few tricks over the millennia, it seems... such as having a 'mortal' disguise (that looks startlingly similar to the off-model Princess Celestia toy that makes all the Bronies laugh.

Awww, this was soo cute <3
It almost dawwwwed the shit out of me and the fanart matches the story perfectly (=
One of my favourite oneshots so far!
Rainbow daring awesome dash.......hehe...
I prefer "smith" as applejacks last name, but to each his own.

Meh....now the guys at work are looking strange at me because i cant stop smiling xD

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