• Member Since 23rd Oct, 2011
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BronyNeumo


Author, dreamer, adventurer, scientist, High Prince of Appledashery, and bonafide lover of sadfics and the Great American Cheeseburger.

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In the wake of a fun performance turned dramatic, two mares weigh their feelings for one another. In a sea of internal doubt and external crisis, might two struggling souls meet and find happiness together?


Also known as YAY! Appledash!

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 52 )

would you please post a link to out in the cold? it doesn't appear to be on this site

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Sure!

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-out-in-cold.html

It's my second favorite fanfic, and I've read hundreds upon hundreds.

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thank you so much it sounds really interesting! i loved the ending and this side story for fluttershy was simply beautiful! :heart::heart::heart:

:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh:what the.....................
dude dude :rainbowhuh:dude:twilightblush:

:raritydespair: That was.. beautiful. The writing was perfect, unlike others which jar me out of the story this one kept me interested.. And the ending felt just.. right.

Fantastic story :ajsmug: I'm going to give a link to all my friends. Thanks for writing this.

I read this over at EqD a few weeks ago, but I love the entire series, and I had to rate it when I saw it was here! Awesome work :yay:

D'awwwwwwwwww, SHIPPING WILL NOW COMMENCE :pinkiehappy:

I know exactly the inside joke fluttershy is thinking about: gay as seals. Somehow it's a nice between the line pun. Nice one there.

I know exactly the inside joke fluttershy is thinking about: gay as seals. Somehow it's a nice between the line pun. Nice one there.

On a sidenote: manly tears were shed

These are the emotions I felt reading this:
1. Happy:pinkiesmile:
2. Sad:applecry:
3. Confused:rainbowhuh:
4. Surprised:pinkiegasp:

I'm going to faint, melt into goo and explode. *robot voice* COMMENCING IN 3... 2... 1... *collapses on the ground, melts into a bloody pile and creates a mushroom cloud of deadliness*

I'm going to act like Duncan from TDA when Courtney joins the game. HHHHHHHHNNNNNNNGGGGGGG!!! *Faints and catches nuts in a bear trap* That shows that I likey this story! Now I'm going to FLIP! OUT! For no reason. FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-*explodes and reforms*

discription of Apple Joy is too cute............ nrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr **head explodes from to much cuteness**

...I think someone needs to explain to me how babies work....cuz....i think i've been lied to at some point...

AHHHHHHH:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
I LOVED THAT ENDING, manly tears have been shed my friend!:rainbowlaugh:

great story!
many manly tears have been shed throughout the story
keep up the good work!

Great story! I totally loved the story! and indeed, manly tears have been shed :pinkiehappy:

It was a beautiful story focusing on one of my favourite shippings. Now I admit that I really really dislike FlutterMac but I didn't let that get in my way of such a nice story. I wonder who Applejoy will take after :rainbowkiss: or :ajsmug: .

Oh also poor Rainbow Dash being transformed into a stallion she must have woken up really confused the day after (back as a mare of course).

Thank you author! :heart::twilightsmile:

I must stop wondering about Pinkie can get about knowing such things. I get supprised when it is not supprising. I think she is going to drive my mind to a halt soon.

:heart:
Favorit!
X-COM Commander Kim Fareseed over and out.

Dame you My little Dashie! When will you allow me to cry again?!

I had hoped fore soemthing smaller not gender changing. Even if it wa temporarly.

how in th wide world was aj pregnat?

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The answer is contained within the story. Read on to find out!

A little AppleDash filly may well be the cutest most adorable thing the world has ever seen... :ajsmug::rainbowkiss:

Oh my gosh!:rainbowkiss: I was thinking of posting at the end of the series, but... This is just too adorable. I have read many fan fictions, only three of which were pregnant shipping stories, but this one, by far, is the best one I have read yet.:pinkiehappy: Not to mention how adorable Applejoy looks. I have to thank you for this magnificent story, and I will finish this series and the Applejoy series by the end of today. Keep up the good work, and I will adore your work more once I am finished.:ajsmug:

From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha

This chapter was amazing and i can wait to read the rest of the series. :rainbowlaugh:

That was just beautiful. You are by far one of the most talented appledash writers that i have come across. Keep up the good work.:heart::heart::heart:

This story is amazing!!! Even though its really sad it's super cute and full of love! Thanks for writing it I enjoyed reading it sosososososooooo much.:ajsleepy::rainbowlaugh::heart::eeyup::fluttershysad::heart:

Now I am glad that this chapter didn't have pics of Applejoy.

Cuz if I did see a pic of her, I would rather rip my own eyes out than see something so beautiful ever again:raritycry:

I...

I need a bucket to store my tears in...:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

How come no one uses Firefly as RD's mom? :ajbemused:

757985 I hate to point this out but the time line is broken due to this side story unless my mind is just being major major derp which wouldn't surprise me

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The side story begins between the second and third installments of the full story and ends after the fourth, so it occurs on a separate yet tangential basis.

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Ah ok thanks my head was really derping out :derpyderp2:

Just so you know I loved this story, and I am now starting to do a MLP fanfic reading of it on youtube, since no one else has done it for this one yet. So I hope that helps this get more reads.:pinkiehappy:

Hey, heres chapter 1 narrated by me. :ajsmug::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowlaugh::raritystarry::twilightsmile::yay::trollestia:

And now, here's chapter 2 narrated by me.

:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Here's Chapter 3 narrated by me

:pinkiehappy::raritystarry::rainbowwild:

Comment posted by liam78787 deleted Jan 29th, 2014

:rainbowlaugh:I Loved This Chapter So Much I Cant Wait To Read The Next And TheNext Its So RomanticAnd SadAt The Same Time. ILOVE IT

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cause they're both around the same age.

Deal with it. I have a friend who became an aunt at 3.

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