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Shadic Midnight Blitzer
Writing occasionally but I'm mainly focused on making music in Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCPYY513XHWV3e2qAsQ4pwYA Discord Server: https://discord.gg/ZTcvEGAejC
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Excellent, will read when I have free time!
11265267
That's cool!
this is gonna be fun to read.
Yup, that would cause drag.
That was honestly something I always wondered. How can you find your own sibling attractive? You live with them. So that means you know all their bad traits and habits.
Equestria has a mental asylum? Hell, most of the villains should be in there.
Damn, she basically blue balled you.
What’s the irony?
They’re twins?
Grown up? Just a guess.
I just got that image in my head and it’s hilarious.
11265333
Thanks!
11265340
(1) Yep!
(2) well Midnight is a Hyper Stallion so his hormones are higher, and well Lightning's pranks aren't as child friendly as they were before, and she's hot. Hormones don't exactly help Midnight deal with the situation
(3) it's more for the insane than those who did wrong
(4) yeah Midnight is very blue! XD
(5) the irony is that other athletic mares envy her large tits yet she wants to lose a cup size.
(6) yes they're both 20
(7) ? Didn't quite understand
(8) XD
11265365
now i'm wondering if a little foal will come down the line.
11265389
That's one of the routes! A pure incest route. Though I'm leaning towards another route.
11265396
really? why??
11265396
"routes"? You mean multiple endings? Why!?
11265403
there are no multiple routes, that term is what I coin the multiple ways I see this story going, but only ONE will be chosen as the final product. It's how I speculate and brainstorm ideas. Will the story end with Midnight finally resolving their forbidden feelings? Or will it end with a foal? You don't know, and in a way, so can't I. I allow the story to flow, and there's multiple ways that the stream of time will go, but only one will be chosen.
11265399
it depends on how the story flows. I have no true end game idea, just a bunch of potential endings that could be possible but only one will become real.
11265405
well why not show all of them.
11265411
because again I'm going to let the story flow naturally.
Hmm... maybe as an epilogue or bonus? I could do that.
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7. Isn’t growing up how they grew?
11265413
well ok.
11265418
I guess so???
11265422
hmhmm
11265405
I see. Interesting mindset for making a story.
P.S. Do you notice that everybody is disliked?
11265448
yeah
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Also, what’s with all the dislikes?
11265461
I have no idea, however once more people upvote the dislikes become inconsequential.
The problem is when the story has around 50:50 dislikes, but I don't see that happening. I try my best to write quality stories.
Also you should've seen just how rough A Change In View went. There were more dislikes than likes for a good amount of time until eventually the upvotes won.
11265463
they're jest mad beacuse of the wifu stuff. haters gonna hate as they say.
11265463
I meant in the comments.
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But anyways I think the upvotes are clearly overpowering the downvotes. So things will improve.
You should've seen how A Change In View went though, or even more, The Equestrian Manhunt. Oh my, it was just so hectic, especially with the latter.
11265495
ah, probably some singular guy who wanted to 'express his rage' by disliking every comment until he reached the limit. Just ignore it, it doesn't matter much.
11265501
Oh ok
So, what fetishes does it have this time? Besides incest.
11265556
I have no idea, I will probably figure it out once I get deeper into the story. Incest will most likely be the only one though???
Interesting and the start, classic!
Heh now I wonder
11265645
Wdym?
11265806
You think this Blitzer could be friends/meet hanzal too?
11265810
Theoretically yes but the focus is the siblings and the Dazzlings.
awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter story
11265812
Was just wondering anyway. Or how his sister would react towards hanzal
11265813
Ah! Thank you!
11265815
Idk, again focusing only on siblings and Dazzlings.
11265817
Sorry, just found it an interesting thought
11265828
Mkay
11265829
Sorry
11265830
It's ok
11265831
Glad to hear it
(Nani kana? Nani Kana?)
ok buddy! DUDE!
The story starts out promising, giving us a little hint of what's to come in the future, which is great, not to mention also makes it clear what the story could be about, despite being in the story summary.
At the moment, the foundations of the story are set correctly, giving us another type of past that we are used to from Midnight, and Lightning. Even more so making it clear that his mother could be alive somewhere, but especially his mother, who is in a mental hospital.
I liked that it was mentioned how each one had to "suffer" to say the least, according to their situation regarding puberty. Which is good.
The little winks and especially the approach and sexual interest, at least on the part of the brother, are felt, by his sister, not so much. so I could say that in the next chapter there may be something more.
To conclude, I can say that the story promises something fascinating, and I am certainly hooked on the first few paragraphs. Having said that.
A good chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
11266050
Thank you!
I like to view this story as a AU to Let Our Values Endure, helped inspire me. Some things are different compared to what's planned, others are grown up version of their interaction and yet others are even spoilers.
Yeah, both Midnight and Lightning find themselves a bit agitated by their bodies. As a Hyper Stallion, Midnight has a lot of difficulty controlling his urges (especially around his hot sister) and as a mare with huge tits Lightning thinks that it will get in the way of her Wonderbolt career.
As more chapters are posted the question and degree to their interest in each other will be challenged, especially when the Dazzlings appear!
Thank you again and I hope you'll find the next chapter interesting!
Actually I have a question for you, I'm going to send it in Discord alright?
Haven’t you used this character before?
11277762
Yep. Both in "What Do you mean We Can't Eat Nuts!?" and "Wolf Tamed". This Moonlight is different compared to the two, a major one being that she's not a Lunar Guard due to the fact that there was no need to increase the army.
A gorgous mare and Blitzer can't get a break, can he? I mean, his sister is almost like moonlight in build and...Libido
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You like the drawing?
11277764
Oh ok
11277777
You liked the drawing?
11277771
Yep!