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Shadic Midnight Blitzer
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Good luck in the contest!
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You too!
interesting and nicely done!
funny ending
This was a good read, hope you get a good rating in the contest!
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thank you!
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heheheha
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yep, karma, eh?
awesome
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
Outside of the corny ass dialogue and knowing where the premise comes from, I found it to be a good enough read.
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Thank you Nota.
Does this now make Midnight a…
Dragon Knight?
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Nah. I made him a Dragon Tamer / Dragon Breeder because he's been smashing many dragoness.
A dragon knight would be a dragon who becomes a knight.
reminds me of a short and unfished comic where Spike was a knight (and didn't know he was a dragon due to a TF spell) and is sent to kill Princess Ember. and of course end up … With her instead -and finding out hes a Dragon.
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Oh, never heard of that comic.
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cant remember the name, comic went dead after only a few pages, and seems to have vanished. (not seeing it on Derpibo)
I think it was connected to a fic, not sure.
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Huh
(Sate, Sate, Sate!)
Okay, let's start with this.
Apparently this story is curious because of the way it begins, giving us a small reference to this game of the knight and the dragon. I must say that I expected more than anything that little more than just the first sword would be implemented, perhaps I thought that by carrying the short sword, our protagonist would have received a mockery from Ember, and would have decided to go with the forger, and return with a bigger sword.
Sure, that's what I expected in the first instance.
Leaving that aside, let's start with other points that the story had.
We are mentioned that here the knights can only access the title by defeating dragons, something interesting and worrying, of course, dragons can become extinct as they occur in Viking legends, because they in the stories say that by defeating so many dragons the they extinguished But hey, that's a point and aside.
It's interesting how the story is handled, showing us that the dragons, at least for the most part, don't seem to be "impressed" or seem to mind being killed, which hints that there are plenty of ponies trying to be knights, but they fail to defeat any dragon.
Sorry, this backstory hooked me too much.
Now moving on to Midnight and Ember's battle encounter. It was quite impressive, although I have trouble understanding some things because I speak another language, I was able to understand most of the battle, although I had to reread the battle to understand it well.
And perhaps, like many, my favorite part was when MIdnight dove into the lava, and fought Ember. which also made me very funny the fact that when the battle ends, he realizes that his clothes had also been burned and well... It turned to ashes to say the least.
(Realism by the way)
Now moving on to Ember and Midnight's sex scene. I certainly liked the first round, the way Ember handles herself, even though you released Ember's character, and by this I mean that you took the liberty of not performing actions like the Ember we know, it's understandable, because the story is It's about sex at the end of it all.
Well, the first sexual encounter was very much in line with what Ember is, a dominant dragon and that she always saw for herself, at least at first. And as we saw, she is mainly amazed by the size of Midnight's cock, which being a horse she shouldn't be too surprised about. XD.
Now, the second round, it was a surprise but not entirely for me. Although Midnight tries to prove her worth in sex, it is true that Ember decided to give him her "chance" although that opportunity was more like a test to really decide whether to keep him or not, her plan was never to really let him go. just to give Midnight the illusion that he could leave. So that way she didn't really recall the idea that Ember had in the beginning.
Now, leaving aside the first chapter that was very good. Let's go to the second.
The second chapter gives us a small glimpse of what happens in the future, which was what happened with Midnight and Ember, and later they tell us that they had a child. Which gives us to understand that Midnight managed to impregnate Ember.
Now, regarding Flurry Heart, I see that you took the idea of the rebellious daughter, honestly I really like that they do that a lot, because it has been made clear many times, that the daughters or sons who are born in a golden cradle, tend to be rude, rebellious and "bad" to say the least.
The scene between Flurry and Midnight's son was good, and although it was an extra, it is appreciated. Especially the ending, making it clear that Midnight not only became too resistant in sex, but also that he was able to literally fuck 10 dragons, including Smolder.
And the end, listening to how they complain to their son that they don't want to meet the gold stained with sperm was extremely funny.
As a final piece of information, I must say that this "meeting" of Ember and Midnight, I saw it very, very similar to an old Karno comic, called "Here's the Dragon" that the scoop is about a horse fucking a dragon. and that he subsequently fucks two others.
Oh well. The story was entertaining and engaging, engaging from start to finish. Recommended for any Dragon X Equss lover
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(1) Well, the original plan was to have Midnight come back and forth with bigger and bigger swords, with Ember using them for 'unconventional' methods. Only problem was word count. I wouldn't be able to fit all of that in 10k words. So that's a scrapped and unfinished plotline.
(2) In the epilogue I was about to give the knights who specifically hunt dragon an alternative name, something like Dragon Slayer or Dragon Hunter.
(3) Yeah, Midnight not having his clothes anymore was planned. ;)
(4) Yeah I liked having Ember dominate Midnight, then give him a chance, before underestimating him and getting dominated by Midnight. Though I honestly don't know who's bigger. A pony or a dragon?
(5) Yep! They did have a son. When Ember told him that "he'd understand what she meant soon" it's that Midnight round ended up removing her heat as he knocked her up at that moment. It's an implied impregnation scene. Of course she still wants to use that one week to make sure Midnight stays with her, he is her new mate, but she was already knocked up by that point.
Oh, if you didn't realize, Lightning Storm is a reference to Midnight's father Thunder Storm and his sister Lightning Spark. Just wanted to tell that.
(6) Yeah I think it fit well here for Flurry to be rebellious. I imagine Hooves Art Flurry Heart version. And thank you for liking that scene.
(7) actually it's five dragons, he creampied each dragon twice. But yeah Smolder is now part of the horde.
(8) yeah I wanted to end the story on something funny and that's what I came up with XD
(9) oh I didn't know about that comic.
(10) thank you! I like that you like it.
"hey guys! I defeated a dragon and got laid!"
Adding "electric cum" to the list of fun phrases...
"Storm it's time you learned actions have consequences. As punishment for soiling the hoard you must now cleanse each individual bit.... with your mouth!"
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Oof!
Most excellent.
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thank you
Nice porn logic
But remember everyone:
- Anal needs a lot of Lube
- Clean well after Anal or get a infection...
- Rough textured ground kills ones skin
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Agreed.
Yeah I didn't find a way to properly add a lubing up scene so I just decided that Ember as a dragon likes things rough. Plus Midnight's shooting lots of pre cum, that'd serve as lube.
Is this story inspired by the game Deepest Sword by any chance?
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Yes.
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I'm writing a story involving the dragon from the game when Big Mac found her unconscious from falling out of the sky, plus the story is a anthro one, like this one.
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Oh cool. And we know Big Mac has the biggest sword.