In retirement, Luna and Celestia now live at Silver Shores.
Up till now, Celestia has refused to allow Luna to read her diary.
One day, Luna suddenly announces that she will be going on vacation.
The next day, Celestia finds an adorable midnight blue kitten by her door.
Surely the two events aren't related?
An entry in the A Thousand Words Contest under Fluff.
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relatable
Yeah that sounds about right
i love kitten luna
That was great.
Revenge is a dish best served covered in fur.
The ending wrapped back to the starting concept quite nicely!
Lol.
Check, and mate!
Oh, and Featured in May for Tag-A-Long's Book Club
Sneaky Luna is best Luna.
Dear Diary,
Today, Lulu and I made a nice eggplant parmagiana together, and it turned out far better than last time! Applying a second coating of eggwash and breading protected the spongey interior of the eggplant from absorbing too much oil far better
We then curled up by the fireplace together for a little after-lunch nap. Luna fell asleep against my side fairly quickly, though I wish she hadn't. She had a bit of a gas attack while she slept, and it was terrible. Like, really, REALLY bad. Two hundred years ago, I personally assisted my guards in the slaying and subsequent disposal of a hydra, and its carcass rotting in the swamp in the searing heat of my summer sun did not smell half this bad.
And of course I couldn't just leave because Lulu fell asleep on my wing. I tried to cast a barrier around my snout for protection but that just trapped the stank in because I never learned air-filtration spells. It was torturous. I mean seriously, has Luna been eating animal flesh when I'm not looking? Dear Faust, the smell.
Of course I would never tell her about it because it would embarrass her terribly, but you can keep a secret, diary. So there it is. My sister Luna made the worst fart in the history of farts, probably ever. I really hope she never reads this, but I had to vent.
Signed, Celestia.
Not bad.
What would you do to get a Klondike bar?...
Or in this case read Celestia's personal diary?
Can't stop laughing, I loved it!!!
The only thing I have to say:
Whether five, fifteen, or fifteen hundred, siblings gonna sibling. Delightful bit of fluff. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the judging.
An oddball ghost happened across your fic and read it. Have a review!
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hehe, that is the most suspicious way Luna could have "gone on vacation"!
aww, nice to see Celestia continuing her breakfast-making for them both, i always loved that bit of her character
aww! that would be what Luna looks like if she transformed into a cat somehow!
aww, and if i'm right this is Celestia making breakfast for Luna again, unknowingly this time. cute!
hehe, of course she would feel at home in Luna's recliner! and augh, cat parkour is always so cute to watch
love it
okay now i am expecting a subversion where the reader expects this to be Luna in disguise, but her plans are actually something a lot more direct and stupid that gets revealed later.
or, Luna is just really great at acting like a cat! that would be a fun bit of irony, if she were really good at acting when Celestia, who really wants to be good at acting, is very bad at acting
aww, and this is why the plan would work! anypony would casually speak of their own secrets if only a cat were the intended audience
hahaha gottem! big L for Celestia!
very cute sibling fluff that is also somehow kitty fluff, which really maximizes the fluff in this thing. great work!
And with this delicious little one-shot, you have earned your 598th follower!
Seriously, though. I just binge-read your entire ‘Twilight blows up villains’ series and they are such a treat. I’ll be checking out all your stories soon.
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Aww thanks
Analysis: The short story presents an interesting premise where Luna transforms into a cat to gain access to Celestia's diary. While the concept is unique, the execution lacks depth and detail. The narrative focuses primarily on Celestia's interactions with the cat rather than exploring Luna's motivations behind her actions. Additionally, the character development is minimal, which hinders the reader's ability to connect emotionally with the characters. However, the prose is simple and easy to follow, making it accessible to readers of various skill levels. Overall, the story has potential; however, further refinement and expansion are necessary to fully realize its potential.
That was adorable.
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I think it's pretty clear that Luna's motivation is a strong desire to read her sister's diary.