Applejack has been asleep for a week, trapped in a strange recurring dream that neither medicine nor magic can wake her from. In desperation, her wife Rainbow Dash takes her to Zecora for help.
With Zecora's help, Rainbow Dash enters Applejack's dream to try to find the cause of it. They find that the farmpony is cursed, trapped in her own mind by a lie—a powerful one. To break the spell and wake her up, Rainbow Dash has to uncover Applejack's lie, and the truth behind it.
But what could Honesty herself be lying about, and why?
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What a sweet ending! The story itself was amazingly written. Rainbow and Aj were perfectly done, both girls' little struggle in this was well founded and nicely executed, if you ask me. Both were perfectly in character, and it was nice finally hearing something off Zacora. Been a little since I read something off her, and something that kept her rhyming still. I also really enjoyed the real twist/lie. I completely understand why Applejack wouldn't have brought it up before hand, and it makes so much cute sense, it hurts. It also adds up with what know of her character.
I initially had thought the little big lie to be that Aj fell out of love with Dash. That would have been something, something that would have had me sobbing before you know it. But boy am I glad that wasn't the case!
Overall, a really fun read that had be guessing and hoping. Nicely done struggles, and perfectly portrayed characters. I enjoyed this a lot.
Thank you for the very fun AppleDash, bud.
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And thank you for the very kind words! That comment made my day
It was a really nice story. Thank you for writing this!
What a sweet story.
While I could come up with ten different ways to write out exactly how that hypothetical foal is produced, I will not, because this story is too damn precious and it's adorable and I love it
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AppleDash is a pretty good pairing, and this is a pretty good AppleDash story :)