I like to write about ponies going on adventures. And crying. And kissing. Sometimes all at once.
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The day after Nightmare Night, Princess Celestia unexpectedly visits Twilight at her library. She scolds Twilight, accusing her of forcing Luna to relive the worst time of her life by taking on the guise of Nightmare Moon.
Luna is close behind her sister, and she and Twilight have a heart-to-heart conversation wherein each comes to understand the other a bit better.
This story takes place shortly after the events of Luna Eclipsed.
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well, it's not bad, but I feel it's a little to much of an emotional yo-yo to be believable. It hurt but it was fun, but I was horrible, but everybody gets a laugh
4576854 That's a fair assessment. I could tell as I was writing that the tone was getting a bit muddled. I did my best to resolve that and make it line up with Luna's own confusion, but *shrug*
Beautiful........ I have no words.
Luna has a long way to heal. Only by talking about it will she get better as we see here. Wanting your friends to understand you is perfectly normal and Luna needed that.
To this I say - The feels have been doubled~
Nice! Liked, favorited, and I'll feature it on the blog I work for!
The only problem I had with this was how quickly Twilight sounded so resolute after Celestia's scolding. Specifically, her "How do I correct this" line.
I understand that you tried to convey her want for helping Luna, and that she was supposed to seem steadfast, but it seemed like it held too little emotion after what had just transpired. Perhaps too bland for what it meant.
Having said that, it was the only problem I had with the story. The rest was excellent.
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Awwe, thanks! That's awesome. What blog?
This was damn good. Gives us a pretty good insight on the whole thing.
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http://onlyhooves.blogspot.com/
Meanwhile, Pinkie Pie, all in bruises and bandages, her eyes barely visible through puffed deeply blue eyelids, and with one of her legs in a cast, just finished writing a letter.
Dear Princess Celestia.
Today I have learned why one should not have fun at somepony's expense. For example ponies that call other pony names are having fun but that pony has a very miserable time. Just like ponies who beat a piñata are having fun while the pony who is the piñata is not having fun at all.
ps. I pinkie-promise never ever in the world to call Princess Luna 'Nightmare Moon', but pretty pretty please with a cherry on top, can I please not be a piñata on your parties again?
4586116 oh god dude I just winced at the beggining of your comment than snorted at the end. I was thinking she deserved it.
4583710 dude can you add a epilogue where Celestia learns the role pinkie played that night. Pinkie and rainbow really caused a lot of problems there.
Beautiful, very beautiful and touchi,emotional, like it, thanks for sharing
This was as good at tying loose ends as What Could Have Been Lost. Bravo, sir/madam. Bravo!
Very well written, even if it was a little short for that kind of topic; but you still succeeded in conveying the plot without rushing anything.
PS: Found a typo:
Should be in
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And so it should. Fixed!
Magnificent - added to Sad Luna
Hmm, now that I think about it, that probably wasn't a wise decision on Twilight's part.
but you did have her make up for it excellently in this. Beautiful story. 
Excellent Story. I approve.
Your fic mirrored my feelings of the episode exaactly. Great job!
This was like the unfinished part of Luna Eclipsed. Good work, it was an amazing story!
its not bad but pinkie should have been included considering she was encouraging everyone to act like they were afraid of Luna. She didn't even notice that Luna wasn't having fun and having everyone act scared of her wasn't fun for the former villain.