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I've had a long life. I've loved, and lost, and laughed, and cried. I've met more ponies than almost anyone else. But I can feel it all drawing to a close, and this story is nearing its completion.

We never realise just how much some ponies mean to us until they're gone, and there is always one pony in particular that means the most. And when that pony goes we can do nothing but remember them, try to keep them alive in thoughts...

And remember...

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Comments ( 35 )

goddamit! this is like the 5th time i've seen this picture used for a story here >_<

I'm approaching that point myself, and more than once I've been tempted to rip out that extraneous seat.

I love it. That is all i can say.

There's just so many ways to describe this crazy life of ours. A ride, a road, a flight. But ultimately, they all hold true. And I definitely don't mind seeing a pony twist on it. How these stories still manage to move me, I haven't the foggiest idea. But add this to my favorites. :pinkiehappy:

Repetitive... altmost hipnoticly so...
the picture makes me read storys and the funny thing is that it never has wronged me yet.....every story was magnifasant in its own rights...
thanx for da story it was great joro

1260234 :pinkiehappy:

1260397 I'm just glad that I managed to actually put a modicum of emotion into one of my stories FOR ONCE!:pinkiesad2::moustache: Thanks, it makes me feel appreciated...:twilightblush::unsuresweetie:

1260404 It is repetitive. If you look at some of the later parts you'll notice that... well...
Anyway, you're most welcome for the story, and thanks for the like and comment!:rainbowkiss: And yeah, dat picture...

Dam that was really touching. Have a like.

i love it!!! its moveing it made me think about alot of things i almost cryed thanks for the story:fluttercry::twilightsmile:

1271632 you almost cried?!

...Thankyou...:fluttershysad:

np it was really deep i love story's like this :heart:

I really liked it because I take story's it hart sometimes and this blow me away the way you put it made me think and helped me with something I was going throw so yea just had to put it in here you may think I am weird if you like

1281197 you are weird...

I like that...

You monster! You killed my really happy mood! D:

Still favorited though. :moustache:

1299679 Wow, how did I not notice this comment until now?! IT'S THE DERPFISH! IT'S ALIVE!

HALLELUJAH! And I'm sorry for killing the mood, but I'm also incredibly happy that I could transfer some emotion...

Thankyou thankyou thankyou, it means a lot to me.

you know I rly liked the way you put it life is like a rollacoster and the people on it are like the people you meat with its up and downs so thank you it helped in more ways then one :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

1337142

I think you have the wrong user, sir.

But if you mean Derpfish the creature/god/being/etc...

I HAVE ARRIVED.

1377362 That is exactly what I mean...:trollestia:

ALL HAIL THE GOD- Hehe, I mean, ALL HAIL THE DERPFISH!

Very nicely written, even if I'm not a fan of sad fics. :twilightsmile:

1389089 Thanks, it means a lot to have one of my smaller fics liked. This is actually a kind of sequel/link-in to another fic I wrote, 'Perfect Shade of Blue', could I get your opinion on that? I'm just trying to get as many ideas for the future as possible...:twilightsheepish:

That was very deep. Great job!

Pinkie died from an explosion? I don't understand the bar. Is it a literal bar or a metaphor? Or both?


Silver out!

1425638 Well, to make it simpler, the whole idea of the rollercoaster is that it is a metaphor, and she actually died from a fire/explosion/whatever, it's more the idea of that the flames took her, fire does that, sooo...

Thanks for liking, this is one of two 'deeper' thinking fics, so I feel good that you liked it :rainbowkiss::twilightblush:

I have a bad thing and a good thing to say about this fic.
The bad thing is that when I clicked the youtube link this was my reaction:

I mean seriously, the darn Dead Island trailer song AGAIN?! Why the Hell does that song keep haunting me? :twilightangry2: With all the beautiful sad songs that writers could use as soundtrack they always go with that yawn inducing song! And even if I actually liked it I would still be sick to my stomach of hearing it!
Sorry if I'm being harsh :fluttershysad: But seriously, when I was opening the link I was like "For the love of Celestia don't let it be the Dead Island trailer song!", and then... :facehoof:

However, the good thing is, well, everything else! :scootangel:
Eeyup, I still give you a thumbs up because the fic itself is well written and pretty deep and philosophical :twilightsmile:

1663175 Lol, forgot that link was still there. Honestly I wrote this one a LONG time ago, so I'd forgotten THAT song...

Yeah, the moment I saw that comment the only thing I could think was FACEHOOF! :facehoof:

Yes, that's precisely it Twilight.

Anyway, thanks for the favourite and thumb!

Dear Celestia. This is just what I had thought of last night. The night I realized just how short life really is. I looked over at a drawing some kid had made, and it had bees in it. Epic flashback time!!!

It was when I was in 1st grade, and had to make a poem. It was about some sort of crazy Leprechaun that got killed by bees, and I had just realized this last night. I never thought of it the week after I made that poem. I'm in 8th grade now (Supposed to be in 9th.), and just realized 8 years of my life blew away, faster than I could even realize. I'd been thinking about how fast life could go lately, but I never knew it could so fast. It's like this part of your story:
"Death is another reflex fear, another futile danger sense that we have inbuilt. We know that it is there somewhere, and that it could be after you, but we never realise just how quickly it can approach, or how silently, until it’s there with you, standing next to you, breathing over your shoulder."
You never even know it hits you till it does. Well, thanks dude. If not for this, I'd probably be still sitting around, contemplating about the space time continuum, trying to figure out how life works. Well, nice job.:pinkiesmile:

The only reason that I knew you were talking about Pinkie Pie was because of the character tag and cover image.

The ride never ends.

This was amazing, beautiful, incredibly well written, and wonderfully emotional.
You did great at capturing the emotions of the situation and I certainly felt it.
:pinkiesad2:

My tears and feelings have betrayed me... I'm gonna go cry in a dark corner now...

My thoughts on this story:

It got added on my profile to the 5 best stories I've ever seen.

This. Was. Beautiful.
Made me cry a bit too.
You wrote this amazingly well ^_^

Yessssssssssssssss! :pinkiehappy:
And 20 more yesssss for the road! :pinkiecrazy:
Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes! :pinkiesmile:


1664618 you now have 50 likes! Ur welcome!:pinkiehappy:

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I am not crying...
No.
I really am not.

Seriously...I'm not...

GAAAAAAAH!!!! DANG YOU SAD FIC WRITERS!!! *sobs*

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