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Jorofrarie


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Endless seas of sand.
The sun, ever bright.
Creatures, constructs of cloth.
And something else...

How will Fluttershy cope in a land with no life, but for one Companion...

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Crossover with the PSN bestseller Journey. Honestly one of the most beautiful games I have ever seen. It is not essential that you have played/seen it, but that would help a bit.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 21 )

Tracked, because holy sheeat I love Journey.

1185644 I know right!

I'm just surprised that only one other story about this exists, and that one has only one chapter that came out ages ago!

WE NEED MOAR LOVE!:pinkiegasp::flutterrage::rainbowlaugh:

-Jorofrarie

I'll read this tomorrow...
I'm slowly gaining fics on my read later list, this is gonna be on the top...
I've listened to the OST 9001 times and played enough to get all tropies and the best possible decorative robes.

Well, this is an interesting story.

I look forward to seeing where this goes.

This story is becoming more and more Awesome with each chapter!!

For a moment she almost thought she saw something moving at the end of the corridor, about her size. But that was ridiculous. There was no other creature in the desert with her, no company…

Mmmm.........I see what you did there...:rainbowhuh::trollestia:

I look foward to seeing what happens next.

Keep up the awesome work and good luck!!

In the game there is a white cloak at the end of the first corridor, but you never see it again.
I now realize it is meant to symbolize you can find others past that point.

Here's the song you need to play after Fluttershy notices the "Presence."

Great story so far. :pinkiehappy:

I'm liking dis alot, sadly though I haven't played the game yet...:unsuresweetie:

Nice.

I'm guessing that the Light in this chapter is the reason why her voice is different?

1218385 She never spoke until this chapter.
The place seems to take away all ability to talk normally, and instead you can only speak through seemingly meaningless sounds.
(I actually played the game this is a crossover of)

1219024 yep, no talking in the desert...

It's like a library I guess...

-Jorofrarie

This is great. I had heard of the game before, but had never played it. Right now I'm looking at a complete walkthrough, to better understand everything. This story is very entertaining.

Will she still have her new abilities after returning? Will her companion (thanks for not making him a pony too, by the way) go with her?

1219960 It's not that it's a desert, it's how the energy of the mountain works.
It seems simple in my mind but to put it into phrasing a mind not like mind could understand is too hard.

perfect representation of journey. Great job so far and i hope you continue it. :twilightsmile:

1220377 Wait and see, I've pretty much already got the ideas for the ending at the moment...

1220728 I know, but thanks for pointing it out anyway. I was just being stupid...:twilightblush: But yeah, the mountain is the key for... well, everything really...

1221055 Thanks! I tried to make it feel like the game itself, so it actually asks more questions than it answers...:pinkiesad2:

-Jorofrarie

I've never even heard of the game, but this is a really well written fic. I shall eagerly await your next chapter.

That's the point. people who foolishly talk on the Mic. can ruin/spoil their partners experience. the game was for the experience. not the fun

Will you ever continue this?

4288296 not sure. I lost a lot of enthusiasm for this one... :(

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