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Applefai


I'm a Christian brony born in 10/19/1996, profile pic done by sweetstrokesstudios.. I may write M rated stories I take commissions $10 for first chapter and $5 for additional chapters

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A prank ton wrong leaves Barry with spectral powers and confined to his new location. Will he be able to adjust to his new life?


A free commission/ co-op story for/with: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/322554/damiranc1

Inspired by Danny Phantom

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

Hmm a very interesting story and getting an underrated character that's actually pretty interesting I had to admit so it looks like the teenage Dragon Name berry has now a special ability he's a ghost and Twilight is trying to reassure him that everything's okay and it looks like this should be taking a while to explain to the kid can't wait to see how this will work out

“Hello, new friend!” Spike said as he stood up and wheeled in a hospital bed.

Lol nice

Walking up to her he saw that she stopped in front of a statue, a pegasus filly with a terrified expression on her face, a demonic centaur who cowered in defeat, and a changeling who was on the verge of attack. Twilight looked at the stone figures with a look of sorrow and loss on her muzzle.

Oh Twilight I'm sure you tried your best maybe someday they can come back and we can try it again

Barry swallowed and silently cried. “W-W-Whatever you say, but please… Don’t petrify me…”

Hey it's okay Barry Twilight would never do that to you

Hey awesome to see the story pick up again well it looks like Barry is going to be staying at the castle for a while until he figure out the power that he has and Twilight studying him how he does this ability yeah he will miss his home but I'm sure he'll be okay once he can control his power I'm sure they can find a way to let him go to the world and maybe use his power for good but it looks like Twilight really felt guilty far what happened to the Legions of Doom which they didn't have any choice they were never going to stop but it's not like they're gone forever they're just stuck in stone someday they will be released so I wonder what else does it going to do guess we'll find out next time

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