• Member Since 25th May, 2017
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Applefai


Hey y'all. I'm a christian brony born in 1996, I just love making stories. Picture of my oc done by a really good friend of mine.

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Spike finds his real father living as a hobo dragon in the dragon lands, along the way he finds out monumental secrets.

This is a free commission I did for https://www.fimfiction.net/user/322554/damiranc1.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 3 )

The story had a lot of errors, the pacing was off and it felt way too quick. However I can admit that it's a great story that if it were edited, probably looked over, and even given more background you could be a great Dragon Story.

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