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of course, of all people it's us two that made it here first.
uhnghgnghgh a fic that has flitter & /cloudchaser/ i guess, AND a mature/sex tag?
gotta read this shit.

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Now to read

A story where Rumble not only bucks Flitter, but in another universe bucks Cloudchaser as well?

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w8 so is he with both Cloudchaser and Flitter? if so will there be a 3 way

Before I forget, I must give credit to my friend and editor who helped drastically at the last moment making these better chapters. That is all. Poodicus Out.

I will read this. I'm such a sucker for Flitter and Cloudchaser.

[edit] is anthro or humanized or something like that. I will not read this.

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I don't think he's all that great of an editor, then.

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trust me on this, despite those two errors you pointed out, the originals of this was much, MUCH worse.

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Intervention chapter is regular ponies if you're interested, rest of it will be anthro, so sorry :(

1412547 I am currently at school, so I have to wait until I get home

1412566 You are doing well, grasshopper

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I like

Contains adult content?

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Also, to everyone else out there who reads this:
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Get a better editor?
Friends aren't hard enough. Some stranger would rather be rude to you than a friend, thus making a stranger a better editor.

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Yes, yes.

That was -[not sure if we're allowed to curse]-ed up.

I don't normally read clop but when i do i-OH WAIT, I NEVER READ CLOP!
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I was hoping the story arc from the first chapter would continue.

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it will, that intervention chapter is meant to be between the fourth and fifth chapters but released along the first.

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then why bother commenting? or even clicking on the story in the first place?

not bad i liked the ending

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Sorry, bad I know, but also the easiest thing to make fun of

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Well, I was just in the neighborhood, browsing from fic to fic in the interest of finding something both entertaining and thought provoking which is indeed hard to find may i add. When suddenly to my surprise, this came up! I swear finding clop on this site ruins my day like a creeper on the playing field.
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Then why not turn off the mature filter? You wouldn't have to see any more clopfics, and I wouldn't have to be annoyed by you anymore.

1416674 50 50 like thos ones that have hooves for feet and hands like furrys do

Hang on. On the 1st chapter we have hands, and now we have hooves? MAKE UP YOUR DAMN MIND! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png

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Chapter 1 is Anthro, what is suppose to be chapter 2 as of right now is actually chapter 5, and was suppose to be a separate story altogether that I was going to submit that was regular ponies, but decided against it because I felt it wasn't good enough.

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Rainbow! What did you do to my poor S key!e.deviantart.com/emoticons/moods/sadness.gif

1452922 Lol, funny as hell.

great story, there are few Rumble/Cloud Chaser/Flitter on any rating :(

Weird and rapey, in both chapters. Comes off like a 1950's era Bob Hope comic about sexual harrassment being hilarious. Didn't like.

i gusse he going to love 2

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I have an odd feeling im one of very few people whom actually READ the description. As tor those who comment about not reading... Obviously the correct response to something you dont want to read.... IS TO NOT COMMENT AT ALL. Trolls will be trolls though. I liked it. Course Flitter and Cloudchaser are very sexy anyways.

This actually has been a decent read in my opinion.

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screw rainbow Dash
(no pun intended if you're one of those people who would)
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1420782but if we alter the filter, we won't see clopfics anymore. Fix your logic.

As I read the title and description my son just some now appeared out of now were I slowly turned my head and pushed him down this is just weird please some one explain this its like pinkie pie but in real life

And yes i have a brony son and pegasister wife

I hear by banish you to space *lifts up his leg and sends her to space* she sees his other trashed girls

inb4 >rape

hhmmm I want to see this happen with snips and snails with trixie and sunset shimer...i don't know why...but i'd like to see a clopfic with those four....am I weird

2331449 have him take the personality test on bronyland.com

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You lucky fucking bastard!!!!!!!!

Get ready to crumble before Rumble.

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I prefer Rumble and Flitter being together.