• Member Since 31st Aug, 2013
  • offline last seen April 18th

LoreLove


I enjoy writing an array of topics such as horror and more. Enjoy your stay for whatever the reason!

Comments ( 6 )

Heyyy I remember this from the pack. Good stuff. :rainbowwild:

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Thanks~ It was a lot of fun writing it out and all.

loved this fic There should be more stay with this couple, along with maud/pinkie pie

nice job on story:twilightsmile:

Probably the hottest thing I've ever read.

You used a very unique writing style in here. It fits this kind of story so much with repeatable descriptions. You took writing very poetically, no straight to the point text, instead you prefer long exotic descriptions.

The characters you have created here were gorgeous. Their interactions, mostly actions with barely any words spoken, show how well they know each other, how natural this feels for them. They love each other beyond any carnal desires, showing those feelings is the top priority for them.

The anonymous pony client you used was a great addition. Unfamiliar to us as much as for Lotus herself, as far as to not mention a single feature of that pony. The mystery of how this client allows Lotus to make blatant, uncouth mistakes.

Truthy an amazing, and very unique reading experience.

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