Royal Measures

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Herald of Opera

Herald of Opera #1 · Oct 22nd, 2021 · 8 · 2 ·

I can't help but imagine how this setup would work with TwiDash instead of RariTwi.

"You said you wanted help figuring out your new appendages, and that's exactly what I'm going to do."

zachary12

zachary12 #2 · Oct 22nd, 2021 · 5 · ·

nice job on story

Teraunce

Teraunce #3 · Oct 23rd, 2021 · 1 · ·

well this was nice. 8/10 great job.

LoreLove

LoreLove #4 · Oct 23rd, 2021 · · ·

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Thanks~ Appreciate it!

AndwhatIseeisme

AndwhatIseeisme #5 · Oct 23rd, 2021 · 1 · ·

Great work.

ALSilvertongue

ALSilvertongue #6 · Oct 24th, 2021 · 2 · ·

I started to read this, but I feel the writing is too clunky with sentences that are too long without pause, or short sentences in awkward places. The premise is interesting, but the story could use editing, in my opinion.

sykko

sykko #7 · Oct 25th, 2021 · 1 · ·

A fun and sweet story.

That One Brony Dude

That One Brony Dude #8 · Oct 27th, 2021 · 3 · ·

A word of advise: try to avoid Lavender Unicorn Syndrome. There are many instances of that in this story, and it gets kind of distracting. It's especially bad when you use terms like "horned mare", as it's not clear which mare you're talking about. There are also a few grammar and spelling issues here and there.

Otherwise, this is a good story. I encourage you to keep writing, as your talent would otherwise be wasted. Well done.

NinjaNin