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zepz
Smut alt for someone with a similar name.
zepz
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One of the best XX stories I have ever read on any website. And I've read literally thousands.
Astounding, you are an excellent writer. Well Done.
Awww
How has anyone had the *gall* to downvote this masterpiece? Gosh this was, an amazing read, start to finish. What intrigued me more than anything else was your incredibly grounded, raw, real-feeling character work, dialogue, all of it. The sex scene(s) were amazing, yes, but the sheer quality of emotional context you put around them were what really made them for me. Bravo, and I'm absolutely eager to see more from you, lewd or otherwise.
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Automated downvotes set up by people futilely trying to prevent porn from being written. Based entirely on keywords in the description like "futa" or "F/F", those downvotes most likely showed up within seconds of release.
I'm digging this so far! Poor flutters at the end though ;(
May i ask for the name of the artist who made the cover picture ?
That was a very good story.
Oh this, this is the good stuff, feels, sexy fun times....more feelings.
This! this was Cute. Porno but Cute. I need more of this.
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Thanks for your kind words! As an author, any and all praise is like delicious, delicious candy.
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I'm glad it worked for you! I set out to try to write sexy, but with at least some emotional impact. I'm pleased to see that it did the job!
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Oh right, I should include a link to that in the long description. The artist is Spectral Unicorn, and the piece is on DA: https://www.deviantart.com/spectralunicorn/art/Did-it-hurt-when-you-fell-from-heaven-611702089
This was really sweet and caring and intimate in a way many futa stories aren't. You justified every crazy requirement and made the characters stay in character. I really loved it.
Great story Bro, I am Impressed!
I don't normally go for futa since I think it's weird. but it seemed ok here and the feelings and build up in the plot was perfect.
Hope to see more of Futwi. Possibly getting it on with a suddenly unconfident Rainbow, or other Alicorns?
Top 10 fic of all time
wow this story is amazing so far. I'll be the first to admit I came for the clop but the characterizations were the prize I didn't know I wanted, well done.
I do like very much how smart and observant Flutters is.
Followed immediately by her being scared by sth. ^^
Great stuff. Good characterization and plenty of feels.
But wait. Twilight couldn't see Fluttershy's face yet, because she hadn't turned around, yet. All she could see was the back of her head.
You did a really good job writing Luna's dialogue. Good job.
good shit 🩷😊
Really good story, i enjoyed it a lot!
You cost me a few hours of sleep!
I tend to read stories at night in bed, sometimes just a few chapters before putting it down. But this one was very engaging and extremely well written that it kept me going because I was having such a great time.
I certainly have to give you your chops as a writer, Fluttershy is a challenging character to write for (even the official / canon writers oftentimes skip over her in episodes of the show) but I really did love your take on her. Flutters being a quiet behavioral / social scientist type actually fitted her very well. It’s a nuance that some writers forget, she’s not dumb, she’s anxious.
I also like how the situation was handled. All with believable drama, not too serious, but not too silly either. When it comes to giving girls a dick it's easy to fall into the silly sex mindset. Which isn’t terrible (who doesn’t like silly sex?) but it’s refreshing to get a good, strong backing of the story to go with the sensate.
Reading the attached blog post was a treat. I nod along with all the points of your process. We do need more sweet cuddlin’s in every story and the more valued task of actually giving the characters… characterization! Along with reasons for being romantically involved with each other. Something I think you hit the mark quite nicely in this story. The little callbacks Fluttershy had to times she spent with Twilight or things she learned from Twilight and the walk together really sold me on their relationship.
Rarity too was written well and she brought a big smile. Rarity’s best pony so she makes every story better. ( “Wahahaha!”
) Her friendly support and the warm relationship she had with Flutters was splendid.
I know you expressed some difficulty with the ending in your blog post, but I think it still works! Not every romance has to end with marriage proposal (something even I’m guilty of in some of my stories). Relations can be on a spectrum, and friends who buck is still fitting! Plus with all the other girls being so curious maybe some poly-amorous future aspirations are possible.
Thank you for writing this! And contributing into good porn-with-plot genre. I know it’s not easy with the downvote tax adult stories tend to get. Also I’d love to know what your non-porn account is, since you only have two stories on this one and I’d love to read more from you. If you are not too embarrassed to share
The phrase you are looking for is 'Je ne sais quoi' (which means 'I don't know what', idiomatic for some missing unknown) not 'Je ne sais pas' (which just means 'i don't know' with no idiom).
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On the one hand, this is genuine author error.
...on the other hand, it's funnier if it's Rarity trying too hard to put on airs, and just being wrong.
I think you already gave her a pretty good apology
By saying how much you and everyone else care for her loudly? How despicable. Though I guess for Fluttershy, that would be very harsh.
This is absolutely fantastic so far! I love the thoughtfulness and attention to detail, and the way this story isn’t afraid to take its time.
Only small complaint might be that Fluttershy’s clothing seemed to be forgotten during the sex. Would have been nice to see a little mention of that here or there, especially if it impacts the sex somehow.
Aw… I was hoping they’d experiment with a blowjob at the end… seems like the one thing this story is really missing.
And now I very much want a sequel to this story where Twilight — somehow — ends up in that fantasized position between Celestia and Luna! Also wouldn’t mind a side-story about what Shining Armor and Cadance get up to!
But I guess the fact that it left me wanting more just speaks to how good of a story it was. Fantastic! Emotionally satisfying and carnally satisfying. Truly one of the best clopfics I’ve ever had the pleasure of reading!
And now I’m off to look at your other stories, hoping to find more!
(Oh, and one issue: there tends to be a missing space after any italics in this story. Might want to fix that.)