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thatonecoffeemachine


I like to eat my ice cream melted. Fight me.

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It reminded her of someone. Whose personality seem to match up with the stallion. Someone who would always take any chance to... add a little chaos to life.

Even Fluttershy needs a little excitement in her life:raritywink:. Luckily, Discord is here to do just that:scootangel:!

She felt a climax coming. Whilst she increased her speed, she couldn't help but slip up as she felt it rising. "Ohh....D-Discord! Yes, please! Please me! I'm....close to...." she closed her eyes as she felt her climax coming close....

Of course Fluttershy would want Discord:ajsmug:.

"You called?" said a voice suddenly.

Speaking of...:pinkiehappy:.

Fluttershy's first response was to shriek, followed by a book getting tossed at the Lord Of Chaos, making him fall off the bedpost and onto the ground with a thud. Fluttershy instead, buried herself in the sheets beneath her. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!" she shrieked from beneath the sheets.

Watching you fantasize about him, that's what:rainbowlaugh:!!!

Her eyes widened. Tuesday! "...o-oh...." she said in realisation. "B-but I didn't notice you! I even cleaned the whole house, for Celestia's sake!"

Flutters this is Discord, he doesn't let you see him unless he wants you to:derpytongue2:!

She sniffed. "...just laugh and judge me already."

Flutters, the day that Discord judges you, is the day that he retires from being the God of Chaos forever:ajbemused:.

"...D-Discord....I....."

"You what?"

"I....I...."

"Tick tock, time is ticking~"

".....I want you..." she finally said, which made Discord smile even wider.

You and your hot chaotic seed:moustache:!

She was in pure ecstacy as she felt him in her. "....harder..."

Discord looked at her, unsure. "Are you sure you're alright with that?"

"...please....." she moaned.

It's always the ones we least expect that want it hard and rough:ajsmug:. Still, nice to see that Discord is so courteous:twilightsmile:.

She felt his cum shoot in her as she moaned aloud. He felt as if he overflowed her as he pulled out. Thick, white streams were all that is left as they shot in the air and onto her, which made him moan in ecstasy at the sight of her covered in his own semen.

O//////O

They laid in bed together, the sheets all clean now with the help of his magic. They laid together in each other's embrace. Discord was fast asleep, tired from their little game. She, however, was still in pure ecstasy. She looked to his sleeping face, and smiled softly.

"...Happy Hearths and Hooves day, Discord."

SHIIIIIP:rainbowkiss::heart:!!!

"....ooh.....oh dear God...." he moaned as she started reaching the tip once more.

I may just be leading to a dead end here but "God"? Shouldn't it be Goddess?

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Honestly, I would dispense with god or goddess altogether. Oh stars, works and it is even used in the show as an alternative to, oh Celestia.

Author's Note:

I have never written porn before and believe me, I'm as weirded out as you're about to be. But at least I know that I know how to write this haHA......... I'mma go stand in the corner and think about what I've done

I failing to see how this story is bad. Its cute, sweet, and a delightful romance novel with a little spice as a additional treat. The clop was short sure, but sometimes that's all a story needs. Nopony was out of character and its understandable to not want be alone. (especially on pony Valentine's Day) I'd happily read another story like this.

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she felt a tingle by the hinges of her crotch.

the hinges of her crotch.

hinges

. . . What?

No, seriously, it appears again later so it's not a typo.

You do know people don't have hinges, right? Doors have hinges, not people. Or ponies.

Story's amusing enough otherwise.

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Oops, sorry for the late reply. English is not my first language and I think I mistook hinges to mean like "end" or edge or side something similar, I don't really know how to explain what I'm trying to mean😅 Thank you for notifying, I will edit it soon.

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