• Member Since 18th Dec, 2017
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thatonecoffeemachine


I like to eat my ice cream melted. Fight me.

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It was during the Chaos Era when Discord stumbles upon a group of fillies. When he saved a filly from getting bullied mercilessly, what would he do when he realised that she did not want to leave his side?

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I'm not certain if the narration was supposed to be a simulation of Discord's chaotic nature, but if it was, good job. A few things here and there that could be fixed, but as a whole, very nice and heartwarming. Good to know that even Discord doesn't like bullies.

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Thanks for letting me know that you like it. I do agree, grammar is something that I need to work on. Welp, thanks again.

I'm a bit confused, was this meant to be written in a way Discord would? Even if it was it still feels rather amateur. Though I do love the idea of this story and will probably be reading the sequels.

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