T.A.B. Here! with a love of all things creative and a bit of a dreamer.
After Fluttershy is attacked by Tirek, she is left with a broken wing and hasn't spoken for years. Yet now she has come of age and it is time that she considered marriage. However who would want a Pegasus that cant fly?
(This is inspired by Annie's song, but will be deviating a lot from the books content also sorry I couldn't find the name of this amazing artist.)
Co-authored with Lore Horse!
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Interesting idea, but problem.
Discord would fix that shit with a snap of his fingers and Tirek would be dead.
I like this idea...but it’s really hard for me to wrap my finger around the concept that mares throw themselves at Tirek....
Seems intresting! There are few plot holes, as pointed out by other commenters, but I like where this is going. You also may want to consider getting an editor, judging from some of the errors I noticed in both chapters.
But don't be discouraged, and most importantly, don't stop writing! This has a lot of potential to be something great!
i like what you have chosen for the topic of you story, very creative.
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I guess your right after sitting down and thinking about it. :)
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I know I was really trying to wrap my head around the discord being able to heal fluttering with a snap. I thought about giving the world rules...But I don't really like rules since they are hard to stick to
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Um how do I get an editor though? To be honest this is all still very confusing to me. Sorry 
Thank you so much!
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...I think I'm blushing. Thank you for giving me courage
I LOVE IT, keep up the great work!!
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I can't remember the exact name of the group I found, but if you look up editing groups, you should be able to find one! If that doesn't work though, I recommend reading your writing aloud and running it through spell check. Even if you only do that, it will help your writing immensely!
Aweeesome!!
I like this story so far, one thing though. I'm a Fluttershy fan and I hope you find very creative ways to torture tirek before this story ends.
Omg sooo good, please update soon!!
Okay, I just have to compliment you. I love the interaction in the authors note and those who read your wonderful story, I don't know, it reminds me of me when I used to do it and it was so much fun, even if no one read my stories. Also, when I always write, I just don't like my dialogue heavy moments and I like description heavy moments much much more. I think you do dialogue heavy scenes wonderfully and I love the description you write. Though, now I just want more because it's so lovely. I adore this story and I think it's going wonderfully!
Its an interesting concept, cant wait for more
Good chapter! Just felt a little confusing to read though. I'm not saying it's bad! I'm not! Trust me! It's just that the story was a little confusing to follow. But other than that, good chapter! Can't wait for more.
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Thanks for commenting! I really appreciate feedback! I was actually a little anxious about this and the next chapter. (especially since they were meant to be one chapter...FUSION!)
Sometimes I am a little worried because I wanted this to be a big project and I might of bitten off a little more than I can chew, so having constructive criticism and comments is always a relief.
Also thank you for feeding my determination!
I thought that this chapter did a good job of setting up the environment.
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Thank you! I'll try to keep it up the environment description then!
Chapter 7 alredy! that was fast, now I cant wait for the gala
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Thank you! I hope you enjoyed the chapter. I thought that the story was moving a bit slow, but it was important for world building (at least I think so) Now we can get this ball rolling!
Please update soon!! This story is awesome!!!
I like this story. It's fun and very engaging. Can't wait for the next installment.
Tomorrow or today. Either one would bring about a hilarious reaction from Spike.
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By the way thank you so much for commenting! 
You mean the gala? :)
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Yeah. The idea that Spike has lost track of time and didn't realize it until that moment is funny.
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Lol I love that idea! with him struggling to catch up with preparations and mumbling under his breath
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Sounds about right. After all he learned from the best.
No! please dont give up on this
it doesnt matter how long I will have to wait, but I would love to see this complete, I am truly enjoying it
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Aaaaw thank you! I promise I have found myself again and I will not be giving up that easily. I want this to be completed as well! seriously thank you for enjoying the story. I am not joking when I say that your comments inspire me.
Sometimes I re-read your comments to find out how I improve and what you guys like. So thank you again. x
Why do i get a 'beauty and the biest vibe here Oo
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I love beauty and the beast. I guess I might be subconsciously influenced by such a romantic story
*Clutches my heart* So romantic!
Also thank you for your comment ;)
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I'm also a fan of beauty and the beast. It's probably why this feels like that.
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It is a lovely story <3 (one of my favourites )
Oh my~ if you could please...post more? :3
It would be much appreciated!
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Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment by the way 
I hope you are enjoying the story so far.
We would love to! we are working on the next chapter
Bad translations? Have you ever seen the Monty Python sketch with the guy using a bad translating book? "My nipples are exploding with pleasure!" That is a quote by the way.
Thank you! Good chapter, though a little short. I can't wait till the next!
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I wish I saw this earlier! Such a good comment
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Thanks LunaJack! Sorry that this was a short one. But the writers block was strong with this one.
I cant wait either 
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Good luck!
By "Annie's song", do you mean Little Orphan Annie?
I'm really happy to see an update, for a a moment I though you were leaving this story
but I'm happy to see you back, I can't wait for the next chapter
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Hi there! Thank you for commenting and nope. BUT! if you like I can send you a link to the book :)
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We are not leaving yet! Not until this story is finished!
Will this story be updated?
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Hi there! yeah the story will be updated. Just a bit of writers block :)
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Ahhh oki! ^^