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kurusagi16


I love fairytales, anime and a bit of an mlp fim fan. fluttercord is a bit of a guilty pleasure for me. ^.^ Fluttershy is one my favorite ponies next to Discord.

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This story is a sequel to MLP: Eternal Dream


Four months have passed, and Discord has been wanting to show Fluttershy his true feelings for her. But all that is put on hold when ancient enemies resurface in Aestas, and the fate of Equestria is in the balance....again. It'll take some old and new friends to stop this threat, and from creating an eternal nightmare. And Fluttershy and Discord's bond shall be put to the test.

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 32 )

I can't wait to see more chapters

Why do I get so many down votes? Is it cause I added Sunset? If it is, stop hating on me! T_T

D'aww Discord loves Fluttershy! :yay: And lol, I love seeing him torment Twilight: that is why Discolight is my second favourite shipping for Discord. But I hope that Sunset is in it means that you are shipping Sunlight or whatever that ship is called? :pinkiehappy:
Oh well, can't wait for the next chapter! :twilightsmile:

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I'll tell you why you have downvotes...Most likely, it's out of pure bias. It could be the ship, it could be that it includes an OC as a major character. There could be those that have a more concrete reason, but I kinda doubt it. Every story gets downvotes. The more popular it is, the more it gets. The only time it really says something, I think, is when it gets more downvotes than up votes. This may not be true in every case, but basically what I'm trying to say is...try not to take it personally. Some probably didn't even read the story and just down voted it because they don't agree with your opinion. *sarcasm*Because how dare you have an opinion that differs from someone else's, right? (*end sarcasm*)

But I think you're fine. There are some grammar issues every once in a while, but I'm enjoying it regardless. Keep at it and you'll get even better! Also, I enjoy your Pinkie. XD

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Thank you, I needed to hear that. As for my grammar, sometimes I get so excited when I write I end up leaving out words or misspelling them or something. I should really read through my work before publishing it. Also, thanks for the compliment on Pinkie. I see her and Discord as the kind of characters you'd meet in Alice in Wonderland. Wacky, nonsensical, and all around full.

So is Discord going too? :rainbowhuh: Or is just that Twilight doesn't know he's tagging along until he does? Sorry that just wasn't really clear to be honest.
And I'm predicting another fight between Discord and Eve in the future :facehoof: Seriously she walks in injured and he thinks she hurt herself deliberately to stop him from confessing to Fluttershy? What made him think she knows he had romantic feelings for her?
I like where this is going though and you have Starlight going so :yay:, her op unicorn magic will be useful! :twilightsmile: I'm glad she's in this story, she has become one of my favourite ponies now! :pinkiesmile:

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Yes, Discord is going, sorry for the confusion. And the reason is for his irrational thoughts about Eve getting between him and Fluttershy is: 1. He's Discord+jealous, a potent combination as seen in Make New Friends But Keep Discord. 2. He's still not forgiven Eve and is using this as an excuse to fuel his distaste for her. And 3. Discord's leap is supposed to be similar to What About Discord where Twilight assumes her friends are under a spell (not a bad accusation but still a bit of a leap). Please continue with the comments.

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Ok that makes sense thanks! :twilightsmile:

I can't wait to see more

please continue soon

"Not excatly. I can still cast spells, but they're more basic and simple. Anything more complicated is restricted. Or at least that's what I could gather. If we come across the Tenebris, we should be okay for a bit with some shield and attack spells."

I found I minor spelling mistake here. Exactly is spelled incorrectly.
Great chapter by the way! :pinkiehappy:

Interesting trick for the last part with Sunset and Starlight, I liked that, I'm guessing it's some sort of illusory magic. Also, awesome scene with Fluttershy mediating between a jealous, stubborn Discord and an annoyed Twilight (though I definitely don't blame her). I could see that in my hear from the show.

Great chapter, though I noticed two spelling mistakes. :pinkiesmile:

Why did her say all that?

I guessing you probably meant for "her" to be "he".

Discord propped his chin in his talons, and though over what she'd said.

I think "though" was also probably a typo.

Well, this is certainly interesting. :twilightsmile:

Is Nightshade falling for Eve? :rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp::twilightsmile:
Aww I would like that a lot if that happened!
I quite enjoyed this chapter can't wait for the next one! :pinkiesmile:

wonder whats going to happen next

Yet on the way, he found his mind strangely drifting to the Nightmare, Moonlight Eve. In his chest, he felt a foreign emotion. He felt...guilt. Guilt? Why would he feel guilt? He shook his head and banished those thoughts from his mind.

Nightshade x Eve! I don't even know if you're going there but... d'aww :twilightsmile: ...And I bet Eve becomes the new queen, right?
But yay! Discord confessed! :yay:
Liked this chapter a lot, especially that moment between Twilight and Eve, can't wait for the next chapter

Theirs a little problem like half the chapter is in that fancy tilted style. the same thing happened to me once all you gotta do is find the spot with the [][I/] and fix it.

other then that really good, felt it was a bit rushed the fight against the king could've been longer, but it was fine. :pinkiehappy:

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I liked the story a lot. :pinkiehappy:

Just remember to take it slow and have fun with it, don't make yourself write if you don't want to. The last thing anypony wants is for you to not have fun writing your story. :pinkiehappy:

That being said I hope I get to read the last part soon. :twilightsheepish:

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I hope so too, but first, I'll need to wait until I gain enough inspiration for it first. Then, I can put together a great story. I hope you enjoy some of my other works as well!

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The Twin

Believe me I still got a couple of your stories on my read later list.

"Hey, Eve, are you coming?" asked Subset Shimmer.

Just a simple grammer issue. I think you mean Sunset instead of Subset.

Oh now I get it.... Night, mares! *facehoof* Also, I may imagine the shadow nightmares as wolves.

Sunset is good! Just a tiny tiny tiny tiny bit too kind. She is perfectly fine now, it is just the time period, and how I am imagining things must be throwing her character off.

(Me to Discord): I Bet you WON'T tell her tomorrow:ajsmug:

(Me to Discord)::rainbowlaugh: I TOLD you, I should have put money on it:ajsmug:

OMG,.........WHY! WHY OUT OF ALL TIMES THAT EVE NEEDED HELP, WHY IT HAVE TO BE NOW???:applecry::facehoof:

Oh boy,Eve and Discord, on the same mission? yikes:ajsleepy:

at the end of the chapter I was all like,: DON"T YOU SKANKS EVEN DARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

DISCORD, NOOOOOOOOOOO that's not her:twilightangry2:

Cute, absolutely cute:twilightsmile:

Starlight and Sunset really do have a lot in common with Eve... I feel the power of friendship blossoming between those three! =D This story arc is really interesting, and I might have to draw some fanart of it when I'm done reading ^-^

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