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ALL MY THINGS ARE HORSE THINGS!

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Copius amounts of porn logic.

So literally no logic at all then.

This is actually a really cute idea! Excecuted well so far.

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Porn logic starts at the desired outcome (sex scenes) and works backwards. This is fallacious in terms of formal logic, but calling it "literally no logic at all" is an overblown reaction that would be disappointing if I expected better of internet randos.

I hope this story ends with them all having an orgy together.

I'm liking this side of Fluttershy.
I like how much she enjoys it.
I like how she wants more.
Rarity, too, for that matter.

I like how much they continue to support one another.
I like the professionalism of the venue.

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I really enjoy thinking about the practical side of safe and responsible kink play.

That was realy good.

I am loving this story so far! :pinkiehappy:

Y'know Fluttershy being the initiator of this, is hilarious! :yay:

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Honestly yes, the more I thought about it the more I thought it made perfect sense.

Fluttershy was still trying to digest what Twilight had just casually revealed about Cadance. “Princess Cadance is… kinky?”

Twilight rolled her eyes. “Yes. She and Shiny have a devoted but open relationship, and both of them really enjoy group sex based fetishes and secret orgies, and I have now said out loud more about my brother’s sex life than I ever wanted to even think about. If you want to know more you can write either one of them, I’m sure they’d be more than happy to tell you. Or invite you.”

:pinkiehappy: Mmm! I certainly hope this gets followed up on! I'm sure Cadance would be more than happy to teach Twilight and her friends a thing or two about sex!

She offered, but…” Twilight shuddered. “That’s just…weird. She was like family. And now she is family, so hard no.

A shame Twilight isn't into incest. Maybe she'll change her mind later on, though. :twilightsmile:

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Sorry, I don't write incest stories!

I do plan on Cadence and Shiny showing up, though...

Never actually seen a story that included a pre-play minder to watch over a bonded sub and the safety concern of such a situation. Rarely considered, probably ignored for the sake of scene progression.

Hadn't thought of it myself until now.
It's is an enlightening look into this underground world.

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I'm always fascinated by the infrastructure of kink play, the unseen scaffolding that makes it all work. I enjoy putting details like this in.

So like you’ve put me into an orgy on top of an ice cream sundae!

Sounds like fun!

After all, baking and orgies are a lot alike; best case scenario, both end with tons of cream filling inside the pie!”

I agree!

Huh. Either pegasi have been on top of safe sex culture for a while or Flash Magnus learns fast. One would expect ancient warriors to be a little more insistent, given how our history looks, but then again, this is Equestria.

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I like the idea of the former, lol. Like, what if safe, sane, and conventual kink play evolved alongside the very concept of pony harmony itself?

To be fair, not an original idea. I think The Clocktower Society stories best explore that idea.

I agree this chapter was really fun

Surrender the Booty

I wholeheartedly approve of this name. :pinkiehappy:

We’d be in the middle of a crazed town-wide orgy right now!

Seems like that's where this story is headed. Or at least I hope so. :twilightsmile:

She was playing an earth pony tonight, it seemed.
Twilight had gone to a lot of effort for this one, it seemed.

Repeat. Other than that, more great work. Love the little worldbuilding notes too, totally the sirt of mistranslation that would happen.

“Nary pegasus flew away unsatisfied, mare or stallion.”

I hope we get some hot gay action in a later chapter.

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I intend to at some point, but it'll have to be with Fluttershy watching, because all the chapters are about her. Not that I have any solid plans... I'm honestly sorta winging it, lol.

11716879 Here's hoping that leads to more butt play. :pinkiehappy:

I'm envious of how quickly you can hammer out chapters.

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Not gonna lie, it's not easy.

I love it when things continual go wrong, one of my favourite bits

She already had her eyes on ‘dragon’ and ‘kirin’.

Spike and Autumn Blaze are available. I'm sure neither one of them would mind a threesome.

“Hmm… I’ll take Fluttershy’s tasty slit… and then your backdoor, Rarity.”

Mmm! I definitely love the sound of that!

‘hey, can we watch and probably make out and have sex while you tie yourself to a mechanical humping machine so you can get bucked silly?’

God, that sounds hot!

“Rarity, she’s clearly preparing some kind of surprise party,” PInkie said.

I hope this gets followed up on! I'm interested to see what kind of surprise party she would do!

I think this is my favorite chapter so far. Quite a unique pairing, here. I don't think I've ever come across a story that pairs Sunburst and Braeburn together.

Also, StarTrix is OTP!

Great chapter! And glad I could be of assistance with the pairing!

Always nice to see Sunburst on top and Brae on bottom. Their relationship felt real and familiar, and even though Fluttershy didn't do much, it's not really exhibitionist if nopony's watching! Also love the inclusion of the pre-sex logistics. Gotta have one of those straightforward conversations of what to expect and what's allowed, especially in... abnormal situations such as this.

Sunburst and Braeburn wasn't something I'd ever thought of but I like it a lot.

How many chapters long will this story be?

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Hopefully 31, not including the prologue

Poor Rarity...Not!!! :raritystarry:

I like all the prep work and safety Cadance put into this. This will be fun. Keep up the good work, but don't burn yourself out.

I hope in the next chapter we get caught up with what shenanigans Rarity is up to.

More. This story is incredibly sexy. Great job, really.

This is really good! hope it continues :pinkiehappy:

This is a very interesting story so far. I'm loving it

The other chapters have been good, but this is my favorite so far. I absolutely love Flurtershy's and Magnus' reflections. They resonated with me and I'll say you out it better than so many others.

Fluttershy considered the mental images this brought up, and decided she liked them.

Me too. Maybe in a future chapter? :raritywink:

“That’s your takeaway?” Discord gaped at her. “I can’t believe I’m being the responsible one here. I’ve spent too much time around ponies.”

And it's doing you good.

Though I love the idea that historic events can be traced back to Discords drunken orgies.

Fluttershy tried not to break character. Virgin sacrifice? She hadn't been a virgin since the sleepover. Perhaps they couldn’t hear her smile, not just at that, but at Twilight’s attempts at melodrama.

Now that's a great take on virgin sacrifice. Well I'm guessing, I'll have to actually read the rest to be sure. Sacrificing your virginity.

any updates on this? noticed it has been awhile

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