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What's a Comfort station?
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In normal usage, it is North American slang for a public toilet.
In this context, it is likely a reference to either:
• brothels created by the Imperial Japanese Military [IJM] in World War II by forcing women and girls from captured territories into sexual slavery. Women came primarily from modern-day China, Korea, and the Phillipines, but many more were affected. The term comes from the phrase "comfort women," the nickname given to these women. The issue is considered part of Imperial Japan's war crimes, but it remains controversial and uncomfortably few attempts to rectify the issue have been made.
• similar brothels after World War II, born of the IJM's program, but "serving" UN, US, and the newly-established Republic of Korea Army (South Korea). Many of the women who participated were ex-IJM comfort women who were unable to return to normal life due to Korean social mores. While the US (and now UN) military had a blanket ban on patronizing prostitutes, it was very difficult to police, and they could do nothing of the "camp towns" that voluntarily set up near the USFK bases. Indeed, the Korean government at the time encouraged these camps, because they generated a not-insignificant amount of income for the fledgling country; the camps were even designated "special tourist zones" so they could avoid new anti-prostitution laws. USMJ code now has it completely illegal to purchase any form of "companionship," so the last vestiges of the system are drying up, and the crimes against humanity involved (human trafficking, for one) are being addressed.
This chapter was really good, and I'm loving this so far. Doing it from Mac's perspective was a good idea, and i love his reactions to seeing fluttershy's privates.
As far as other ideas? what were you thinking? Were you planning on bringing more of the mane 6 in on this? Or ideas in terms of different fetishes?
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I was thinking of putting other members of the mane six inside of it or even different other side characters maybe from the perspective of the pony inside.
Or just other fetish stories in general. examples (time-stop, mini pony, or glory hole." maybe something even more extreme just whatever anyone would like, I write best when I have someone to write for other than just for myself.
9490200 I'm in favor of more characters, I'd love to see rainbow in one, maybe with a bit of teasing and degradation/humiliation, which rainbow enjoys.
There's ever only 3 guys that are constant regulars the others are backgroundish... shining armor big mac and sunburst.... see how they like stamina potions .... Hymn if you do grab a stallion you could grab some of the girls out in the open at the same time like with shining you got twilight showing royal support of the law without realizing it's shining but he'll know ..... muhahaha hell cadance could be in on it knowing its shining and team up with twilight / Big Mac gets Aj/ and sunburst could get trixie n starlight same time.
Those are all great ideas, thank you for letting me know of some good guys I could use. I'll have to start putting some ideas together to see what works.
Wow, this was super hot. Didn't expect the piercings, but I approve 👍
as for guys, I'd say big mac and involve aj. If also like to see a bit of rainbows post reaction possibly
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Oh oh two more ....rarity should be put in the machine they pick her name but shes out on buisness they snag her coming off the train when she gets back to make up her absence and spike witnesses it knowing where shes going plus he should have a hemipenis and get bigger due to a little greed episode .. next day its spikes turn muhaha. 2nd blueblood gets picked no mares are interested because hed bemoan his ... fate .... loudly thinking hed be overrun with mares ... but theyd know it was him in there now ...but a few stallions with grudges do ... well 2 mares he forced .. aloe and lotus...could get revenge with strap ons.
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I love all those ideas and thank you for commenting, I just finished the next chapter but I already did have ideas for dragons, I like involving blueblood. And don't you worry about Rarity I've got plans for her, some really fun plans.
Meh ... not gonna lie it was pretty vanilla... sorta disappointed compaired to what happened to rd and flutters it was wham bamn thank you maam ... their wasnt any toys or a switch to make him lie on his back ... might of been better to have him eat out twilight while rarity tried milking his prostate.... but he stood their like a mannequin.
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Thank you for some honest feedback, I did take this chapter differently, I'm trying to build a little background for each pony pairing them off. So I can focus on the lovemaking a little more, I had to shrink a lot of the scenes down just to fit it into even that many words. that might be a spoiler for future chapters.
You need to work on your grammar and punctuations.
I don't know why, but I just want to see Luna use the Comfort Station and give herself a magically created cock for it.
Also, there REALLY needs to be a better selection system. The amount of physical damage that could potentially occur if somepony gets selected two days in a row, and potentially more, could be irreparable, and there NEEDS to be a safeguard for pregnancies, Applejack in this chapter being proof of that. Even something as simple as a magical scan to see if they're in heat, and if they are they get turned away.
The piercings should be removed immediately after shifts end, otherwise it is counter-productive to the anonimity aspect, and could potentially lead to the ruination of certain careers. The Wonderbolts, for example, being a sub-branch of the military would likely have strict policies against piercings.
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I wouldn't mind adding Luna, and as for the selection system it's still in its infancy and some of the gaurd ponies are crooked and possibly corrupt. I am sitting on a few unpublished chapters and the stations do change in a few aspects in different areas. Also about the pregnancy I might not have stated it but when I was writing it I might have removed the part where I wrote about their being a manual or instructions on the tables set up next to the stations with the toys on them that basically stated they agreed to whatever happened to them when using the station, because like you stated you woudnt know whose inside and situations like incest may occur and they would have to know the risk. I did also see about the piercings I understand and I'll see what I can come up regarding that, all great incite thank you.
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But to leave in the possibility of pregnancies is both reckless and DANGEROUS.
I can understand having the ones that use the station doing so at their own risk, but the one inside has no choice, which, again, can ruin whatever career they're pursuing, most significantly being, once more, the Wonderbolts, for example.
I'm not saying these things need fixing NOW. Just that they need to be addressed at some point for the safety of the 'volunteer'.
And, don't use Dash as the catalyst for the pregnancy issue. She's already got the piercing to deal with, and we don't need this to turn into a fic about 'how badly can we fuck with this character's life and health'.
Maybe Derpy/Ditzy/Muffins. As a long-time mail carrier, she should be fairly secure in her job, and it would certainly bring it to attention as needing to be addressed.
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I see where your coming from but since they are drafted they are suppose to handle and cope with their new situation however they can. This fic is gonna change the lives some not all for the best, I have already made plans for pregnancy in this as well. Also about it messing with their life and health adding this system into and place will change lives no matter what. Some careers and other life descions of characters might change but I wouldn't say that's ruining them. One more thing won't add gore or other game changing stuff to make this fic like that. I hope that helps clear up some things and I also appreciate all the thought and care you have for the way my fic affects the lives of the ponies.
Have you considered putting somepony in there for a longer term job?
Maybe a few days or even a week of constant use and over-stimulation?
Very hot concept but I can't handle the sparse punctuation