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A stable Relationship

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Twilight Coltist

Twilight Coltist #1 · Mar 30th, 2020 · · ·

Well... it’s well written, but considering this has the labels mature, sex, and fetish, everyone is kind of waiting for another chapter before they can give you some form of critique or if they like it, but you’ve also marked it as completed, so going on what you’ve given us. This could loose the sex and fetish tags be marked as an Everybody story and no one would be none the wiser.

Honestly I’d say don’t worry about it being a 1k word story and finish it off it’s clear what your aiming for and with at least another five hundred words you could earn the mature, sex, and fetish tags.

Let your freak flag fly proudly once more.

(Written @4am half asleep)

Polish3d Marble

Polish3d Marble #2 · Apr 3rd, 2020 · · ·

Yes thank you for commenting it isn't complete I had wrote this a while ago as an opening and hadn't published it. I shall keep working and finish it.