5/30/21 Done with next chapter working on following because their are cliffhangers in latest chapter
I am a fanfic critic i will give your work a number from 1 to 200. But i will only mark your work if you have more then 10 fanfic storys
Otherwise known as Alastor Deer Daddy~
It is better to be kind in a world full of hate, then join that hate and become part of the problem. Simply be kind and better.
Owner, founder and CEO of Randomocity Enterprises(tm).
I am everything you've ever feared, disguised as a derpy little pony.
I love to provide constructive criticism based on grammar, story structure, understanding of the characters, and plot. I read aloud using 1 of 3 different narration voices, which is what my pfp is of.