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PegPony


I like writing stories but I'm also a kinky fetishistic loser, that's all you need to know really.

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So being the sensible women they were, Applejack allowed her girlfriend to speak for them both, which is why of course Fluttershy's next words were "Bring it the fuck on".

I nearly pissed myself!


It's always the quiet ones.

Rainbow next. I think Fluts can get her out of her "comfort zone". That... and uh... Rainbow's kinda losing on the "getting dicked" front. To AJ. Can't really see her letting that stand for too long.

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I'm glad you liked that line :)

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It is my plan in the sequel that Twilight, Pinkie and Rainbow will come around one by one. I also intend for Rainbow to only come around after some form of competition with AJ, though much like Zipporwhill, I want her to be a hardcore lesbian, so I don't know if she's going to be competitive enough to briefly swap sexuality, but we'll see where it goes :)

Some punctuation errors here and there, but overall, I like where this is going.

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Yes, punctuation and grammar is my biggest problem when it comes to writing. If there is anything specific about the punctuation that you want me to change please don't hesitate to let me know. I'm glad that you like the direction this series is going in :)

Sir. They are about 15(ish). This means its fucking FBI time.

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Who do you mean? The main 6? Because this is set in an alternate universe, the main 6 are women in their mid 20's at this point. If you mean Zipporwhill and Scootaloo then they have also been suitably aged up.

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Ah, I thought you said the main 6 were 18 in a previous story, my bad.

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No problem, we all make mistakes! What you may be remembering is when I referred to Zipporwhill as a teenager, other than that I can't recall a time when I've specifically mentioned a character being a teenager. Then again I never specifically mentioned how old the main 6 were.

Nice. Very neat indeed . . .

A ass that dont want to quite :rainbowlaugh:

Nice but really to short...

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If you're willing to point out some of the errors, I'll happily correct them :)

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I'm sorry that this chapter disappoints you, I'll try to do better in future.

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Short chapters and punctuation are my two biggest faults, I'll try to do better in future.

Time for Raritys beauty milk shake :raritystarry:

Rarity gives some impressive tongue lashing in all areas it seems :raritywink:

The unexpected end of the build up got me good. Great laugh 👍:rainbowlaugh:

Neat build up... I should have started un chronologic order :facehoof::rainbowlaugh:

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Haha, it usually helps to go in chronological order :P

Personality-wise, Winona reads almost more like a cat, with the whole aloof pride thing.

Not that I mind, mind you. It’s just a funny thought I had that I thought I’d share.

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That is an interesting observation! I'm not sure why I decided to give Winona that kind of personality, it just seemed like a good fit for the story :)

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