• Published 3rd Dec 2018
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Its a Comfort station, what could go wrong - Polish3d Marble



Fluttershy is given a job offer one she just cant refuse.

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Meh ... not gonna lie it was pretty vanilla... sorta disappointed compaired to what happened to rd and flutters it was wham bamn thank you maam ... their wasnt any toys or a switch to make him lie on his back ... might of been better to have him eat out twilight while rarity tried milking his prostate.... but he stood their like a mannequin.

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Thank you for some honest feedback, I did take this chapter differently, I'm trying to build a little background for each pony pairing them off. So I can focus on the lovemaking a little more, I had to shrink a lot of the scenes down just to fit it into even that many words. that might be a spoiler for future chapters.

I don't know why, but I just want to see Luna use the Comfort Station and give herself a magically created cock for it.

Also, there REALLY needs to be a better selection system. The amount of physical damage that could potentially occur if somepony gets selected two days in a row, and potentially more, could be irreparable, and there NEEDS to be a safeguard for pregnancies, Applejack in this chapter being proof of that. Even something as simple as a magical scan to see if they're in heat, and if they are they get turned away.

The piercings should be removed immediately after shifts end, otherwise it is counter-productive to the anonimity aspect, and could potentially lead to the ruination of certain careers. The Wonderbolts, for example, being a sub-branch of the military would likely have strict policies against piercings.

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I wouldn't mind adding Luna, and as for the selection system it's still in its infancy and some of the gaurd ponies are crooked and possibly corrupt. I am sitting on a few unpublished chapters and the stations do change in a few aspects in different areas. Also about the pregnancy I might not have stated it but when I was writing it I might have removed the part where I wrote about their being a manual or instructions on the tables set up next to the stations with the toys on them that basically stated they agreed to whatever happened to them when using the station, because like you stated you woudnt know whose inside and situations like incest may occur and they would have to know the risk. I did also see about the piercings I understand and I'll see what I can come up regarding that, all great incite thank you.

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But to leave in the possibility of pregnancies is both reckless and DANGEROUS.
I can understand having the ones that use the station doing so at their own risk, but the one inside has no choice, which, again, can ruin whatever career they're pursuing, most significantly being, once more, the Wonderbolts, for example.

I'm not saying these things need fixing NOW. Just that they need to be addressed at some point for the safety of the 'volunteer'.
And, don't use Dash as the catalyst for the pregnancy issue. She's already got the piercing to deal with, and we don't need this to turn into a fic about 'how badly can we fuck with this character's life and health'.
Maybe Derpy/Ditzy/Muffins. As a long-time mail carrier, she should be fairly secure in her job, and it would certainly bring it to attention as needing to be addressed.

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I see where your coming from but since they are drafted they are suppose to handle and cope with their new situation however they can. This fic is gonna change the lives some not all for the best, I have already made plans for pregnancy in this as well. Also about it messing with their life and health adding this system into and place will change lives no matter what. Some careers and other life descions of characters might change but I wouldn't say that's ruining them. One more thing won't add gore or other game changing stuff to make this fic like that. I hope that helps clear up some things and I also appreciate all the thought and care you have for the way my fic affects the lives of the ponies.

Have you considered putting somepony in there for a longer term job?
Maybe a few days or even a week of constant use and over-stimulation?

Very hot concept but I can't handle the sparse punctuation

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