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KingdaKa


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The Canterlot High Halloween party is a longstanding tradition. And often a bit of a dud, but who expects quality entertainment from a school, anyway? But with the wild year that's passed them by, Principal Celestia enlists the help of Pinkie Pie to make this Halloween party the best one yet. It will be fun, it will be frightening, it will be the best party she's ever conjured! Armed with her expertise and the help of her friends, even preparing the festival is sure to be a blast.
After all, why shouldn't everything about a party be fun?

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Surprisingly good read. Possibly a little too technical, but I think that makes it a good example of making the romance a part of the story rather than just a straight romance story. Deserves more like and comments.

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I had to knock some serious dust off to write this, since I hadn't written anything in a good long time. It shows a little, I think, but it helped me get back on track.

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No problem, I was just dealing with the same. Halloween deserves the love though, so a little assist only adds appeal.

Very nicely-done. I have so been Twilight it makes me wanna... help her. Maybe not hug her. Might be a bit too much for her.

I like that Pinkie's crush is apparent yet subtle in that it focuses more on the aspects Pinkie actually likes about Twilight instead of her being all like 'I really like Twilight and no, I won't give any indications of why I do.' Makes it feel more natural and cute. Great work!

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