• Published 24th Aug 2021
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Saving Cozy - StormLuna



The Legion of Doom has just been defeated and everypony thinks the three need a harsh punishment, save one. One pony wants to find out what caused Cozy Glow to go down the path she did before punishing her.

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Determining Cozy's Fate

The Legion of Doom had just been depowered and thanks to some chaos magic from Pinkie Pie, they had a large cupcake fall on them along with some chocolate rain. It was at that moment that Discord realized that he had best take his chaos magic away from her. Once he had his magic back, Celestia approached the defeated villains.

"There isn't a punishment worthy of all you've done!"

Discord began to talk with Celestia and Luna. After a brief moment of whispering Luna said, "Oh, that does seem fitting."

Discord then asked, "May I help? Please?"


The two princesses nodded and they readied themselves to cast their spell. The villains knew that their time of freedom was up. While Chrysalis had an angry look on her face, Tirek had a nervous look on his face and Cozy was clearly scared, knowing what kind of fate awaited them. There was one pony in the crowd that felt truly bad seeing Cozy Glow showing the fear she was, this pony could not stand the thoughts of the young filly suffering the same fate as millennia old villains. Right before the spell was cast, a yell would come from the crowd.

"STOP!"

The princess powered down their horns and saw Starlight Glimmer approaching them. Starlight was visibly distraught as she pleaded, "Please don't do this to Cozy Glow! She's just a filly!"

Many of the creatures present weren't sure what to think of it but there were some who would disagree with her. "Starlight, with everything she has done, she has to be punished." Stated Celestia.

Starlight replied, "Look I know she should be punished but none of us have ever asked her why she went down the path she went down. None of us truly know what is running through her mind."

Starlight's closest friend would come into the conversation, "Starlight, I'm not sure what is going through her mind but she was part of a team that nearly destroyed Equestria. Celestia is right, she needs to be punished."

Starlight's gaze turned to Discord as she gave him an icy cold glare, "Yeah, thanks to Discord. This is all his fault!" She then turned to the princesses and pleaded, "Please, just let me talk to her, alright?"

Celestia sighed, "Alright, but we can't let her get free and escape this."

Starlight motioned for Cozy Glow to approach her. Cozy Glow was horribly nervous to be talking to Starlight given that she had trapped her in a magic ball when she was in the process of draining all the magic from Equestria. Once Cozy Glow started walking towards Starlight, the princesses had their horns flared up in the event Cozy Glow was to try and escape that they could grasp her in their aura.

Once she got to Starlight, Starlight requested, "Could you let me have some one on one time with Cozy? I want to talk to her alone."

The princesses nodded and once the two got out of earshot of the others, Starlight would turn Cozy to where she was looking straight at her. She asked, "Cozy Glow, why would you do this? Why would you work with those two, Tirek especially after what happened last time?"

Cozy held her head low and grumbled, "You wouldn't understand, nopony would understand."

Starlight knew that getting her to even talk was going to be tough but thought maybe revealing some of her past might get her to talk, "Cozy, I have my own past that I'm not proud of so I think if anypony would understand it would be me."

Cozy looked up in genuine curiosity, "Really, you have a checkered past? But how, you're so close to Twilight."

Starlight then went into detail with the little villain over her past. She told her about everything dating back to losing her only friend. She told her about how she would steal cutie marks and lure ponies out to her town in the middle of nowhere. She then told her about how she would stalk Twilight Sparkle and break into libraries she shouldn't have so she could alter Starswirl's time spell and why she did it.

After hearing this Cozy gasped, "Wow, you really hated Twilight didn't you?"

Starlight replied, "I did, I hated her more than anything for stealing my village away from me so I thought that erasing her ever meeting her friends would be a way of getting back at her."

Cozy was shocked that the mare that seemed to be so good and so devoted to the cause of teaching friendship would have such a past. Starlight could tell that Cozy was becoming more interested as she continued, "And then there were even times after I was reformed that I wasn't exactly a good pony."

Cozy gave her a slight smile causing Starlight to continue, "Well, I hadn't been doing my friendship lessons and Twilight was getting upset so while she went to Canterlot, she gave me an assignment to do one of my friendship lessons" she began to smile a bit as she continued, "well in an attempt to really impress Twilight, I tried to do all five of them at once."

Cozy had a feeling that this was probably going to be funny so she began to smile more, "Well, I decided to be stupid and I cast a spell on my friends to do my bidding hoping to get them done but in the end, it wound up being a disaster."

Cozy then broke down laughing over what Starlight had told her. She laughed, "Really, you cast a spell on your friends?"

Starlight laughed in return, "Yeah it wasn't exactly the best idea I ever had but in the end everything was fixed." She then wanted to know more about Cozy and her past. She continued, "I know my past isn't perfect Cozy but still, I'm curious as to what led you down the path you chose."

For the first time, Cozy felt like she could talk to a pony about her past given that Starlight had shared some of her past. She grit her teeth and began, "My mom, my mom and dad...." She began to cry, "Th-they abused and neglected me. They nev-never cared about me. They always hit me, yelled at me an-and when they weren't doing that, th-they never supported me."

As Cozy began to cry harder, Starlight pulled her into a hug. "I'm sorry they did that to you Cozy, that had to have been hard."

Cozy screamed, "It was, th-they never treated my siblings that way. Th-they loved them, they always got gifts on Hearth-Hearthwing's Eve while I got nothing, I nev-never got anything. An-and then they dumped me at Twi-Twilight's school l-like I was nothing. They nev-never once told me th-they loved me."

Starlight began to stroke her hoof through Cozy's mane and said, "I'm sorry Cozy, that had to be hard."

Cozy cried harder, "It was, I-I felt like nopony cared about me at all and when I got to the school, I just could-couldn't fit in and th-that was when I decided to get revenge on everypony."

Starlight asked, "And that is when you started communicating with Tirek?"

"Y-yes. I wanted to get back at everypony be-because I felt like nopony cared about me."

Starlight asked, "And then when Discord teamed up you, Chrysalis and Tirek, you wanted to continue your quest to bring Equestria to its knees?"

Cozy began to cry more angrily before yelling, "Yes, I wanted to punish everypony for having me locked up! I hated everypony, I-I mean everypony!"

Starlight knew all too well how that felt as that is how she felt after Sunburst left after getting his cutie mark and after losing her town. She replied, "I can only imagine that Cozy, but I don't think you deserve to be turned to stone. I think you deserve a second chance."

Cozy began to calm down as she asked, "You think I deserve a second chance?"

Starlight gave her a smile, "Of course I do Cozy. Twilight gave me a second chance after I nearly destroyed Equestria multiple times!"

This caused Cozy to laugh, "Wow, and I thought nearly draining all the magic from Equestria was bad!"

Starlight laughed in return, "Well when you're angry at the world, you think big and with us, we probably thought too big!"


While the two were talking everypony couldn't help but try to make out what they were saying. That was more difficult for some than others. Luna was focusing on their interactions especially close and saw that they were interacting in a way that surprised her. She asked, "Twilight, you know Starlight better than anypony else. Why do you think she is so adamant on saving Cozy and why do you think they are acting like good friends?"

Celestia added, "If you ask me, they are almost acting like a caring mother and a distraught daughter."

Twilight remained silent for a minute before replying, "I have a feeling that Starlight sees a lot of herself in Cozy Glow and wants to try and save her."

Luna asked, "Could you explain."

Twilight began, "Princess, both of them have checkered pasts. Starlight Glimmer enslaved a town by stealing cutie marks and then nearly destroyed Equestria multiple times over. Cozy Glow nearly drained all the magic from Equestria and then she nearly brought the country to its knees." She thought deeper and then everything became very clear to her, "That's it! I think I know why?"

Celestia asked, "What is it?"

Twilight continued, "You know, after Starlight nearly destroyed the world, I gave her a second chance and she must feel that Cozy deserves another chance."

Luna sighed, "Perhaps but it still seems odd that Starlight feels so strongly about this."

Celestia added, "And even if we were to not turn her to stone, where would she go? Who would watch over her to keep her out of trouble?"

Twilight gave the two a smile, "Just wait, I am sure Starlight already has a plan for that and will be willing to take on more responsibilities to save her."


Starlight and Cozy were continuing their conversation and Starlight had done a very good job in getting Cozy calmed down. After initially having a great amount of shock over Starlight wanting to save her, she knew she was dead serious. She had a genuine smile on her face, "Starlight, if you are able to save me, where would I live? I don't want to go back to my parents, never. I'd rather go back to Tartarus."

Starlight gave her a much bigger smile, "Oh I can think of one pony who would take you in, one pony who could be the loving mother you deserve."

Cozy's eyes grew wide when she heard this as she knew exactly who Starlight was talking about. She gasped, "Really, you're going to see if you can take me in and be my mom?"

Starlight continued, "I am. Cozy, I see a whole lot of myself in you. We have both made decisions in the past that weren't the best, we have both felt shunned by the world at one point and now, we both have others who want to help us start over."

Cozy pointed her hoof towards the others and asked, "But what about them? I don't think they'll be as understanding."

Starlight suggested, "I think the best thing you can do is apologize for your misdeeds. That is what worked for me and knowing Twilight, that should work for you too." Starlight looked back towards everypony else and added, "Shall we? I know if you apologize it will help you, a lot."

Cozy gave her a nervous smile as the two headed back towards the princesses. Starlight began, "Look, I know what Cozy has done is very bad but I see a lot of myself in her." Twilight smiled as Starlight continued, "She was shunned by her family, she felt like nopony cared about her, she felt unloved and ultimately wanted to get back at everypony, just like I did."

She then nudged Cozy and she began, "I'm sorry everypony. I know what I did was wrong and that there is no excuse for it. I know I deserve some sort of punishment and whatever that is, I'm ready for it. I just hope that maybe someday you can all forgive me."

Cozy Glow's apology sounded so familiar to Twilight, it was a whole lot like Starlight's. Celestia and Luna were not sure if she was sincere or not but Twilight could see it in her eyes, she could tell that she was indeed sincere. Twilight then motioned the princesses in a circle so they could discuss this.

Twilight asked, "So what do you think we should do? She seems genuinely sorry and I know she feels bad for what she did."

Luna commented, "Perhaps but she may only be saying this for Starlight. I'm sure Starlight told her about her past and Cozy may just be trying to take advantage of us. She is a master manipulator and I could see her manipulating Starlight to take her in."

Celestia was more positive, "Sister, Starlight is stronger than you think and given Cozy's past, I doubt she would just go vouching for her. If Cozy deserves to be turned to stone, I know she'd be on board with us."

Twilight would go more in depth, "Listen, like I said I have a feeling that Starlight sees a lot of herself in Cozy. I think that if anypony can guide Cozy on the right path, it is Starlight." She then gave the elder princesses an more intense look and added, "And I will tell you this, if you do turn her to stone, the moment I take over I will free her and put her in Starlight's custody." A few tears began to run down her face as she finished, "Yes what she did was bad but she's just a filly! With the right guidance, she can live a good life."

Luna sighed in disgust, "Very well. If Starlight wants to take her in, I suppose it will be ok."

Celestia agreed, "I do think that would be all for the best. I know Starlight could be the mother that she needs."

Twilight replied, "Alright, let's go and share with them our decision."

The three broke their circle and approached the two. Celestia kept a neutral look on her face as she began, "Starlight Glimmer, it is very obvious that you do not want us to turn Cozy to stone and it is very clear that you care for her deeply despite what she has done in her past."

Starlight replied, "Your Majesty, I have my own misdeeds in my past as does she and I was given a second chance by Twilight." She then turned to Twilight and continued, "I remember after I was defeated that you brought up how breaking apart one set of friends makes the magic that protects Equestria less powerful and you were right. When you befriended me, I was there to aid in saving all of you from Chrysalis." She then looked down to Cozy before turning back to the three princesses, "Look, I was given a second chance so why not Cozy? Even her friendship with me could make the magic that protects Equestria even stronger so I ask that you please give her another chance."

The three princesses gave one another a smile before Twilight commented, "And judging by the way you two were interacting, I have a feeling that you want to take Cozy in and raise her as your own."

Starlight replied, "I would like that very much."

The three princesses gave one another a smile before Celestia added, "Very well Starlight. Let's have you fill out the proper paperwork so you can officially be classified as Cozy's mother."

Cozy was ecstatic upon hearing this. She took to the three princess, hugged them and exclaimed, "Oh golly jeez, thank you, thank you, thank you!" She then flew to Starlight and embraced her, "Thank you mom, thank you! I'm so happy, I finally have a parent who loves me!"

Starlight tightened the embrace and replied, "No need to thank me Cozy. All you've ever needed in life is a loving parent and now you have one."

As the three princesses took in the whole moment, they couldn't help but be happy for both Cozy and Starlight. Even the normally stoic Princess Luna had tears running down her face. Celestia also had tears running down her face and noticed this. She asked, "You ok sister?"

Luna's voice began to break, "As I see this, I can feel the love between the two and I feel happy for them. I know that Starlight will be a great mother for her, Starlight will guide her down the right path to be a great pony."

Celestia agreed, "She will." She then turned towards the villains, who Discord had immobilized, and finished, "Shall we take care of them now. They are a threat to not just Cozy but all of Equestria."

Luna nodded and they along with Discord used their magic to turn Tirek and Chrysalis to stone. Cozy saw this and was surprisingly happy. She approached the monarchs and said, "Thank you your Majesties, now they won't be a threat to me, Starlight or Equestria."

Celestia replied, "I know they won't." She then turned to Starlight and suggested, "Now let's get up to Canterlot and get your adoption of her taken care of. I'm sure you two are looking forward to it."

Cozy celebrated, "Yes sir-eee!" She flew around and landed on Starlight's back before continuing, "Come on mom, let's get going!"

Starlight agreed and the two followed the princesses back to Canterlot to get custody of Cozy signed over to Starlight. While Starlight couldn't help but wonder why her biological parents weren't going to be involved in this, she knew that the princesses could make sure that Cozy would never have to suffer at the hooves of those two.

As they headed to Canterlot, Cozy couldn't be happier. Finally she would have a caring parent. She knew that despite what she had done to her in the past, that Starlight's love for her was genuine and that life truly was going to be better for her. Gone were the days of her being a master manipulator, what she wanted now was a normal foalhood, one where a loving parent would guide her in the right direction.

Comments ( 66 )

Ah A Cozy Glow redemption fic. My favorite.

10949924

This is something that just popped into my mind yesterday....and this opens the door for something bigger.

*sniffles*

Darn it, you made me cry. A beautiful story really.:raritycry:

Nice to see you are with this part too! I always found it odd, given she's a foal, it dies not fit with Equestria's merciful nature, plus looks unfitting for a kids show to do this to a foal

10949950

Well I cried a bit while I was writing this. I think this would have been a lovely ending to the series, much better than Cozy getting turned to stone.


10949963
Yep, I was not a fan of Cozy suffering the same fate as Tirek and Chrysi. Part of my belief is that Cozy had shitty parents and that is what led her down the path she took. With guidance and a loving parent, I believe she could lead a good life.

10949968
A much much better ending indeed.

10949968
indeed! I find it was wasted potentionalö not to show how a foal get up with an idea like this. I mean, sombra and such, e know from the previous episodes but cozy?

Speaking of if i may, a buddy of mine had a similar idea, though cozy is more of a side/support than main chrachter

10949975

Thanks.
10949976
Thanks.


10949977
Hopefully your friend's story does well.

10949979
It sure does! In fact, i work on a spin off of it featuring a OC of mine

I do like very good redemption stories for Cozy Glow sometimes. And glad that Starlight remembers that they are almost the exact same kind of ponies that went the wrong path, and wants a second chance.

Although, there is one little thing that I don't like. And it's have to do a certain moon princess FORGETTING that she is on the same boat as Starlight and Cozy Glow is. And it's very hypocritical of her to think that Starlight's plan to reformed Cozy might not work at first.

Even though she was a VILLAIN too ( Nightmare Moon )!!! And even she has a hard time to forgive herself in the past?!

10949983

That is why I chose Starlight to be the one to adopt Cozy Glow, because their pasts are so similar. I had Luna forget because she was so obsessed with punishing the Legion of Doom that it didn't even cross her mind.

10949987

Well I didn't like that. I mean, how can she forget her own villain past? That was literally a part of her own character arc?! I mean, she was on the frickin moon for a thousand years because of it. You can't just forget that!!!! And I'm even surprised that neither Twilight, her friends, or even Celestia mentions that as well?!

I'm so mad that those fools forgets one of their own defining moments in their entire lives?!

10949992

I know I should have included that yet in the finale it seems like she forgot that when it came to Cozy....and one thing that still irks me is that the princesses had the audacity to allow Discord to aid in turning the Lod to stone with all the stunts he pulled.

This Is my new headcanon now

10949995

Yeah, I actually agree. Technically, it's the writers own fault in the first place. And it's really ridiculous that they forgot Luna's own Villainess past ( Which is irony HOW the MLP show literally starts off of in the first two episodes?! ), and that Discord keeps getting away with his own mistakes, AGAIN!!! I mean, did they also forget about Discord's betrayal in Season 4 Finale with Tirek as well?!

10949999

Cozy Glow having terrible parents is part of my ponyverse and is vital in her back story. I like Cozy, I just think that she was mishandled in the series. Seriously, they gave her no backstory at all.

10950001

I think they did forget about Discord's misdeeds and in "The Last Problem" they have it look like Fluttershy and Discord are a couple. I found it bad enough that they had her forgive him for the season four finale but what he did in season nine should be unforgivable. Not only did he nearly destroy Equestria but he used FOUR living beings as pawns just to test Twilight. He can say he meant well but he cared nothing about those four and that shows that in the end he really hasn't changed as much as the writers would like us to think.

10950002
I completely agree with you, and, in fact, you expressed in this commentary the thoughts of many adequate readers. So I have nothing to add.

But I wouldn't tie Cozy with Starlight. In theory, this is nothing new. However, the world of Equus is organic and can be fantasized about.

It would be much more sensation, if you make something unusual out of it. For example, the reincarnation of some kind of majestic princess or magical power or someone else. She may even be a former changeling who has turned into a pony filly once and for all!

10950015

I respect your opinion but I have already done this with Starlight and any future works would build off of this and thus, she would need to have Starlight as her mother. I do like the idea of Starlight being a single mom raising Cozy all while dealing with the school. I know it isn't original but I do like the whole idea of it.

10950406

I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the fave.

10950978

That is my head canon for her going bad. I do not like it that they simply made her bad for no reason. I figured that horrible parents would be enough to push her in a bad way, especially given how I believe they treated her. She was a very poorly managed character, they could have given her a back story.

10952045

I'm glad you like it. I have other head canons that some people do not like, such as a majority of the mares in Equestria being lesbians....well with the exception of these self-inserts I've been doing. I keep on flipping back and forth though whether I should keep on doing them or not. One part of me wants to while another part of me simply wants to retire from doing those kinds of stories.

10952364

Changed your name and avatar I see. You do make a good point though, I shouldn't stop them. Hey I have done OC stories that are like self-inserts but I enjoy writing those more. Fun fact: Back when I first joined this site back in 2013, I vowed all I would ever do would be E rated stories....well you can clearly see that wound up not being the case!

10952378

You could try TwiSparkle or maybe TwiSparkle and then some number that holds significance for you on the end of it.

10952382

Hey it is your user name so you should have it your way. Nice avatar by the way.

10952386

You probably knew I'd like your current one anyway, right?

Okay, this was nice..
but, uhm; where is the sequel, where we can follow the two as Cozy grows up?

on a separate note, would Trixie be involved?

11013913

I haven't done the sequel yet and regarding Trixie, yes she will show up.

Aww! Such a wholesome fic! The fact that Starlight saw her little self in Cozy is so in character and is heart warming to read and think about!:heart: Really glad I gave this a shot, it being my very first dive into non-mane six focused stories!

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I figured that by this time Starlight would have the empathy and see a lot of herself in Cozy Glow. Plus, I'm in the crowd that didn't like what happened to Cozy Glow. Rather than bitching about it, I figured writing my own ending would be much better....remember how Cozy was mocking Tirek about talking to his Gram Gram in his sleep? I think I know of a way to reform him....have her show up. It is clear that she means a lot to him....I can see it now, her talking the princesses into letting her take him home with her....she'd grab him by the ear and be like, "Now you young man, you've caused enough problems, you're coming home with me!"

Tirek, "I'm sorry Gram Gram, I'll leave the ponies alone!"

11057207
:rainbowlaugh: love that!
Also I'm on the other side of the spectrum on what happened to Cozy but I can see where your coming from. This defiantly helped me see that side!
Also, I really do think Trek could be reformed that way! Jokes aside I mean. The fact that he even said that was evidence in itself. Also that would make for some really good entertainment! Seeing LORD TREK held by the ear and dragged away! I'd read that, if it were to become a fic, and I'd love it too!

11057210

One thing that I found so dissatisfying was that they never gave Cozy Glow a backstory and I figured that she needed one that would cause her to go down the path she did. I never have liked the whole, "oh she's an adult but never grew physically" idea. It is like people think children are incapable of doing what Cozy did. Also, out of all the foals in MLP, Cozy is by far the most adorable.

11057229
Agreed! One reason for me disliking Cozy to some degree, was 'cause of the lack of backstory, we had something going for Trek and Queen Chrysalis's past mainly revolves around the hive so not much to explore, but for Cozy there were so many possibilities and so much to explain and nothing was. Probably for us to speculate ourselves, huh?:rainbowderp:. I do think though that cozy is a lot smarter and more cunning for her age, whatever that may be. She seemed one step ahead of the CMC, plus she was able to out smart, the princesses themselves... which is very telling on how capable they are isn't it? Aside from that.... she still does seem like a filly... like when she was unable to fool that stallion, I think in Frenemies… on how adorable she was - her reaction to that is what I'm talking about - was something a filly like herself would do.
Also, also, Cozy's cuteness has gotten more groans out of me then anything else, but I suppose, (To please her) she is to, some extent, cute:scootangel:

11057238

Part of the reason I wrote this was to give Cozy Glow a backstory, a backstory that would be believable. With her, it is up to us to create her backstory since the writers never bothered. Yeah Cozy is conniving and can easily fool others but it is her adorable factor that causes me to like her....she does win my prize for most adorable filly UNLESS you bring Filly Starlight in....nopony can top her.

11064322
Well, you nailed it on that front. Cozy getting no love and turns to evil for her first answer, seems quite believable, I mean she was a filly when she did it, so her priorities may not have been in the right place... correction, they weren't in the right place. Plus, she didn't seem to have been the most.... sane filly around, if you catch my drift there. If the show had given us something for her, honestly I think it would have gone in a similar road, but instead of abuse they would have said megkection and if she were to have gotten reformed, said issue would be resolved with in an episode, so I think I'm glad they left it up to us to come up with something believable.
As for the cuteness thing, sure I agree with you there, Starlight definitely did rock those pigtails.:pinkiehappy:

Correct me if I'm wrong but please explain to me.. Why is Cozy Glow being saved in this..? It feels like Starlight is being a hypocrite here for being a reformed villain. Look Cozy Glow is involved with being about to rip off Spike's wings earlier in the fight so either Cozy Glow is saved along with Tirek and Chrysalis or Cozy Glow is petrified in stone with Tirek and Chrysalis. I feel like there is favoritism here that shouldn't happen when these are the three biggest villains that just tried to take over and destroy Equestria.

11085206

Cozy is being saved because Starlight believes that she can guide her down a better path, the princesses feel this way too. Cozy is a young filly who can be led down a good path while Tirek and Chrysalis are millennia old villains who have a much longer track record than Cozy at being evil.

11085220
You mean Tirek and Chrysalis cannot be led down to the better path since they are millennia old villains? What about Discord? Do you think he should be punished for this incident since he's the one that planned this all? Tirek was already in Tartarus and Chrysalis was in the Everfree trying to find her own marbles while Sombra is already dead but Discord resurrected him only to use Sombra and have him fail and be killed again. Do you think Discord a free get out of jail card right here? These four were already imprisoned and wandering around until Discord has the idea to 'use' them for Twilight's 'test'. And why would the princesses feel about this too? Didn't we just saw Princess Luna glaring at Cozy Glow when the filly got sent to Tartarus? Is this in their character because I don't think Princess Cadence would just let Cozy Glow go after seeing Spike's wings about to get ripped off and Cozy was involved. Do you think this is a concept of Cozy Glow being rewarded for evil deeds? Celestia and Luna are pissed that Cozy Glow just tried to steal all the magic from Equestria using that spell in the school of Friendship and Princess Cadence wouldn't let any of her enemies get away scott free after they were just about to kill Spike! She and Shining Armor are very protective of Spike and they wouldn't let that happen.

This might have worked better if Cozy Glow betrayed Tirek and Chrysalis in the middle or just right after the beginning but she was with them all the way and stick to their plan. And one more thing, You said that Cozy Glow can be lead down a good path but with what happened in the episode Frenemies since Tirek and Chrysalis was also there, That would explain that Tirek and Chrysalis can also be redeemed and be taught friendship. Tirek even saved a nest of baby birds in that one episode Summer Sun Setback. Yes they are capable of learning about Friendship if you gave them time. Because all three of them have been showed to do it in the episode Frenemies.

I can tell I'm going to enjoy this story since Cozy Glow is one of those characters that I like

11085244

For starters Cadence wasn't even there at the end of that battle. Also, you do make good points and perhaps next year I can do a sequel to get them freed. Perhaps Twilight can have an epiphany that they can be redeemed too.

Regarding Discord, I'd be all for tossing him into Tartarus for what he did. What happened wiped out every single amount of character growth he had since "Keep Calm and Flutter On." I'm working on holiday stories right now but in 2022, I can do this. Granted Cozy Glow will be very nervous when Twilight decides to free them and hell, I might even have Discord bring Sombra back....again. I already did one where the real Grogar came back and wound up leading a peaceful life so I could do the same with those two. Grogar wound up teaching at the school so I could do something similar with Chrysi and Tirek....to be honest, I think those two would be easier to reform than Sombra since they nearly did become friends in Frenemies. I honestly wished they would have embraced friendship, that would have been funny.

awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next story:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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I'm glad you like it. It is one of my cute foal stories.

> "The villains knew that their time of freedom was up. While Chrysalis had an angry look on her face, Tirek had a nervous look on her face and Cozy was clearly scared, knowing what kind of fate awaited them."

I was not aware that Tirek is female.

I fear manipulation. They really should check the backstory of Cozy Glow.

11173699

Thanks for pointing that out so I could fix it....now it reads he instead of she.

One thing that always irked me was no backstory for Cozy Glow....so I figured she needed one.

11173702

Indeed. Now that you gave her 1, Starlight Glimmer should verify it.

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