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Starting on a stormy Saturday night, Cozy Glow asks Sandbar for help. Starting small at first, Sandbar eventually realizes that the little filly needs a pony to look up to. Set in a universe where the events in School Raze never happened.
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Very nice! Cozy could have been so much more in the Show. And i don't Think its pathetic, look at fluttershy and her fears. Some say she has a fear of Heights.
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Exactly. She could have been an amazing character
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Yes. I Love how the fandom gives her a Second chance. Also applies to tempest as Royal Guard and how throrax was Made a Royal Guard as well
Sandbar comforting Cozy Glow during a thunderstorm? I could swear I saw someone suggesting this idea somewhere recently.
This is a nice, cute story. Cozy is being adorable and Sandbar is understanding.
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Yeah, I fulfilled my own /r/
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That was the intent. Thanks
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But didn't you want a pic, not a fic?
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Something is better than nothing
Aside from kicking School Raze to Tartarus, what else from season 8 changed? The description is kinda vague, aside from the bit for Cozy.
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Cozy also never became Twilight’s special helper. I’m still quite new to writing, and don’t have a set path for this fic yet. However, one of my ideas is that Sandbar’s parents might end up adopting Cozy.
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Not sure what you mean by Cozy becoming Twilight's special helper. I didn't watch much of season 8, so that might be why.
Not sure about the rest. I'll wait and see.
Very nice! Sandbar's personality is what I like about him so much
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Yeah, he really cares for Cozy despite not knowing her that well (yet). Signs of a good friend
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Yep!
You mean filly?
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Oh frick. Thanks. Fixing it
Interesting story. I'm expecting a sort of Rainbow/Scootaloo relationship forming between Sandbar and Cozy.
I'm assuming that in this alt. universe, Cozy Glow is not evil? Or...
...is she just that damn good at manipulating Sandbar?
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Yeah, that’s my intention. And no, in this alt universe, Cozy is not evil.
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She uses her manipulation skills to get cuddles and ice cream, decided it was better than power.
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That's what I was thinking originally.
"Set in a universe where the events in School Raze never happened." Where is this splendid Utopia and how do I get there?
Nice story. Very sweet. Upvoted.
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>Where is this splendid Utopia
No clue
>how do I get there?
Drugs?
Short but good. And that Orphanage, shut down.
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Actually, the orphanage is still running
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I meant, it should be shut down
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Oh, you haven’t heard the beginning of the shit they did
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Oh, I have read a story with familiar plot once, so I can imagine
Poor Cozy. I want Sandbar's parents to adopt her.
Very nice! And a unique idea she had a brother
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Cute!
Nice way to get Cozy to testify.
Adorable. About the orphanage, this is gonna be good!
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Accidentally uploaded the wrong chapter. Should be correct now
Sandbar's gay?
Uh... oh... okay then.
That was amusing.
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It’s a popular headcannon, dude… and it’s not that far fetched
Nice Way of how to explain it to cozy.
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S09E07 denies it, however.
Aww I hope Berry feels the same way.
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It confirmed he wasn’t gay. It did not refute him being bisexual, however.
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We’ll see…
I think Evil Cozy is a fascinating character, but having Cozy remain a...decent filly is also an interesting direction.
It always hurt to deal with such moments sand emtions. But doesn't mean you can't still be with her, cozy.
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As best friends, yes. Not as girlfriends however, as Fizzy’s straight.
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That's what i mean. Acepting it is hard but a good character Development
Good build-in of the "Rainbow Factory".
With each chapter this is no longer Cozy and Sandbar story.
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Thanks
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Don’t worry, we’ll get there quite soon